God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from estory
I think you captured something of the admonition of the Spirit to be selfless, to do things not for your own pride but simply out of love for the other person. Nice use of the rhyme scheme in this one, great musical elements, the alliterations were good, and you had a nice sublime, upbeat kind of voice for this. estory
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I think you captured something of the admonition of the Spirit to be selfless, to do things not for your own pride but simply out of love for the other person. Nice use of the rhyme scheme in this one, great musical elements, the alliterations were good, and you had a nice sublime, upbeat kind of voice for this. estory
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from His Grayness
I enjoyed this work very much and wish this author the best of luck in the contest! I cannot offer anything to improve this delightful work and thank this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I enjoyed this work very much and wish this author the best of luck in the contest! I cannot offer anything to improve this delightful work and thank this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Air Spirit
The opening comment seems to summarize the premise/message in your poem: God Creates man so He needs no certificate of recognition from man -- yet one of the 10 commandments is to not to have any other Gods before him.. so while he doesn't need man's 'recognition' his commandments dictate that you must love him, and only him.. so in my mind, he actually does require 'recognition' -- otherwise, one's salvation is dubious.. Perhaps I may have not understood your poem correctly, but that is what I understood. However, that is the beauty of poetry, that people can interpret your words differently.. the miracle of English language..
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The opening comment seems to summarize the premise/message in your poem: God Creates man so He needs no certificate of recognition from man -- yet one of the 10 commandments is to not to have any other Gods before him.. so while he doesn't need man's 'recognition' his commandments dictate that you must love him, and only him.. so in my mind, he actually does require 'recognition' -- otherwise, one's salvation is dubious.. Perhaps I may have not understood your poem correctly, but that is what I understood. However, that is the beauty of poetry, that people can interpret your words differently.. the miracle of English language..
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from royowen
It's true tha God never justifies Himself, He doesn't have to justify His own existence to anyone? Beautifully written in great language and just be thankful you have got to know Him. Well done, good writing, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
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It's true tha God never justifies Himself, He doesn't have to justify His own existence to anyone? Beautifully written in great language and just be thankful you have got to know Him. Well done, good writing, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about God who appears to those He have chosen and give them the wisdom and knowledge they need about His existence, we can tell others about His existence; then it is up to them if they want to believe if they are chosen by God.
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A very well-written poem about God who appears to those He have chosen and give them the wisdom and knowledge they need about His existence, we can tell others about His existence; then it is up to them if they want to believe if they are chosen by God.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Rickie1
Faith can't be proved. That's the point of it. Faith is the strength inside knowing why your right and there is no need to poove it. Those that need proof will never understand. They need to open their minds to all possibilities.
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Faith can't be proved. That's the point of it. Faith is the strength inside knowing why your right and there is no need to poove it. Those that need proof will never understand. They need to open their minds to all possibilities.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an interesting poem and entry for the contest
But the poem contradicts its own theme:
"Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone"
and here you've told everyone about it in the poem.
I think God is much greater.
Best wishes to you
RS
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This is an interesting poem and entry for the contest
But the poem contradicts its own theme:
"Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone"
and here you've told everyone about it in the poem.
I think God is much greater.
Best wishes to you
RS
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
Your poem certainly falls within the contest parameters. I enjoy the spiritual poetry (actually wrote one myself). I enjoyed this one immensely. Good luck in the contest.
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Your poem certainly falls within the contest parameters. I enjoy the spiritual poetry (actually wrote one myself). I enjoyed this one immensely. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written poem for the contest. You used very good words and imagery from the art work. If the Lord tells us not to do something than I think we need not do it. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written poem for the contest. You used very good words and imagery from the art work. If the Lord tells us not to do something than I think we need not do it. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
