God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from LIJ Red
If you stare long and hard enough, all apparent proof of God's existence wavers out of focus. Yet we think and live among dark energy and spacetime with natural laws. Excellent poem.
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If you stare long and hard enough, all apparent proof of God's existence wavers out of focus. Yet we think and live among dark energy and spacetime with natural laws. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Aries Poet
No need to brag about God, or publicize, when he speaks to you, listen, be grateful for all that you have and enjoy your personal time with Him. Great poem, love reading these acrostic poems!
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No need to brag about God, or publicize, when he speaks to you, listen, be grateful for all that you have and enjoy your personal time with Him. Great poem, love reading these acrostic poems!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Janet Foor
This is an excellent poem of faith and gratitude for all our blessings bestowed on us by our Creator.
Your acrostic form with out punctuation is flawless. excellent rhyme in the last stanza.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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This is an excellent poem of faith and gratitude for all our blessings bestowed on us by our Creator.
Your acrostic form with out punctuation is flawless. excellent rhyme in the last stanza.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from apky
As usual, your poem is spiritual, uplifting and inspiring.
I particularly liked these lines:
Long for no pride or make it a stand of publicity
Enter into no venture to promote for a personality
Fund it not to fashion anyone for a divine entity
To prove anyone's existence or status of immortality
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As usual, your poem is spiritual, uplifting and inspiring.
I particularly liked these lines:
Long for no pride or make it a stand of publicity
Enter into no venture to promote for a personality
Fund it not to fashion anyone for a divine entity
To prove anyone's existence or status of immortality
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this was certainly an outstanding example of this contest entry, a real challenge in the write - beautifully expressed in its tribute to our Father. It complies perfectly with the prompt, and I cannot do otherwise but wish you best of luck in the contest. This was, by far, a most difficult endeavor, and its accurate completion does you proud...
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In my opinion, this was certainly an outstanding example of this contest entry, a real challenge in the write - beautifully expressed in its tribute to our Father. It complies perfectly with the prompt, and I cannot do otherwise but wish you best of luck in the contest. This was, by far, a most difficult endeavor, and its accurate completion does you proud...
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Raul1
This is very good writing. I think that all things in life have to be appreciated. I think this poem tells about something obviously different. Very good work putting this in 123 words. Excellent work!
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This is very good writing. I think that all things in life have to be appreciated. I think this poem tells about something obviously different. Very good work putting this in 123 words. Excellent work!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Shanbreen
Hi Alcreator. This is a good poem on faith and you have certainly kept within the constraints of the witting prompt. I love the fact that you do not make this a religious issue. Well done.
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Hi Alcreator. This is a good poem on faith and you have certainly kept within the constraints of the witting prompt. I love the fact that you do not make this a religious issue. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi ALD, a good entry to the contest. God does not have to prove himself and you make this clear in your well written poem. The word Faith speaks for itself. No proof, but we have to have faith in existence. Good Luck - Dorothy
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Hi ALD, a good entry to the contest. God does not have to prove himself and you make this clear in your well written poem. The word Faith speaks for itself. No proof, but we have to have faith in existence. Good Luck - Dorothy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey there, thank you for sharing another fine poem. You've used some excellent rhymes and presented in a most pleasing manner.
Many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
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Hey there, thank you for sharing another fine poem. You've used some excellent rhymes and presented in a most pleasing manner.
Many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, God Came and Left, makes a great case for surpressing ones communion with God. Some will run, so nothing is gained. Some will doubt, so something is lost. Some will believe, then run.
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This spiritual poem, God Came and Left, makes a great case for surpressing ones communion with God. Some will run, so nothing is gained. Some will doubt, so something is lost. Some will believe, then run.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
