God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from judester
Great entry. Being humbly religious these days seems impossible with this government. Using God's name for their own selfish goals. Like God spoke to him to buy a bigger private jet! puleeese. I love the idea of being touched and in tune with God. A private, blessed affair. Good luck in the contest. Cheers, j
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Great entry. Being humbly religious these days seems impossible with this government. Using God's name for their own selfish goals. Like God spoke to him to buy a bigger private jet! puleeese. I love the idea of being touched and in tune with God. A private, blessed affair. Good luck in the contest. Cheers, j
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
And that is exactly what faith is, don't boast about it, just learn to appreciate what you were given. This is a lovey poem, using the words perfectly to tell what you feel. The acrostic words are brilliant: God Came And Left... Well done, and good luck in the contest! :) Sandra xxx
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And that is exactly what faith is, don't boast about it, just learn to appreciate what you were given. This is a lovey poem, using the words perfectly to tell what you feel. The acrostic words are brilliant: God Came And Left... Well done, and good luck in the contest! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
Effective use of the acrostic style in a spiritual free verse poem.
I find great irony in the publishing of a piece which describes the Lord's wish that it not be published. Confusing to me. Nevertheless it's well expressed.
Bill (WildWithWords)
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Effective use of the acrostic style in a spiritual free verse poem.
I find great irony in the publishing of a piece which describes the Lord's wish that it not be published. Confusing to me. Nevertheless it's well expressed.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from TPAC
Not much on rules of contest, but will state various thoughts stated in this write were breath taking holding my interests. A little sway here and there in my view yet holds compelling factors.
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Not much on rules of contest, but will state various thoughts stated in this write were breath taking holding my interests. A little sway here and there in my view yet holds compelling factors.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent read and entry into this very difficult and thought-provoking contest, great artwork to enhance this wonderful poem, very well done and best wishes for the contest****kahpot
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What an excellent read and entry into this very difficult and thought-provoking contest, great artwork to enhance this wonderful poem, very well done and best wishes for the contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from tbacha58
Good luck for the win, especially writing about God, i loved it, as without Him we can never survive our daily life. I have been away, hop eu remember me. Much love Terry xoxo Sorry i am out f six stars. Next poem.
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Good luck for the win, especially writing about God, i loved it, as without Him we can never survive our daily life. I have been away, hop eu remember me. Much love Terry xoxo Sorry i am out f six stars. Next poem.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from meeshu
I love this poem for its simple straight-forward style. east to read, easy to understand a salient message. well done Alcreator, and cast no graven images..................meeshu
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I love this poem for its simple straight-forward style. east to read, easy to understand a salient message. well done Alcreator, and cast no graven images..................meeshu
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"God Came and Left", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"God Came and Left", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from Neonewman
This is a wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered for this particular writing prompt. God lives in us all, just taught that in Sunday school past weekend. Thank you for sharing.
God bless
Steve
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This is a wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered for this particular writing prompt. God lives in us all, just taught that in Sunday school past weekend. Thank you for sharing.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
Comment from ciliverde
I like your first line a lot - God came and left me with no proof. That is the essence of faith, isn't it. Then you follow this with - Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone. Except for the hundreds on FanStory ;)
I do agree that it is deeply personal - faith, that is.
Carol
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I like your first line a lot - God came and left me with no proof. That is the essence of faith, isn't it. Then you follow this with - Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone. Except for the hundreds on FanStory ;)
I do agree that it is deeply personal - faith, that is.
Carol
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
