God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like the approach of this poem being written as instructions or mandate. It is unique to so many on this site. It expresses many of my thoughts. On top of this is a hidden acrostic, as a possible metaphor of God.
The crux of this poem reminds me of the book A Prayer for Owen Meany by John Irving. Hopefully, you've read it. Below is a short summary to refresh your memory or tickle your curiosity.
https://www.sparknotes.com/lit/owen%20meany/section7/
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I like the approach of this poem being written as instructions or mandate. It is unique to so many on this site. It expresses many of my thoughts. On top of this is a hidden acrostic, as a possible metaphor of God.
The crux of this poem reminds me of the book A Prayer for Owen Meany by John Irving. Hopefully, you've read it. Below is a short summary to refresh your memory or tickle your curiosity.
https://www.sparknotes.com/lit/owen%20meany/section7/
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
Comment from Iza Deleanu
God is a miracle and sometimes we refuse to believe until danger strikes us. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your wirings and the contest I think you have a winner.
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God is a miracle and sometimes we refuse to believe until danger strikes us. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your wirings and the contest I think you have a winner.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
Comment from AuthorLadyElegance
I liked the title a lot. I feel like there could have been more in depth in the writing but it could also just be me overthinking it. It was a good poem.
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I liked the title a lot. I feel like there could have been more in depth in the writing but it could also just be me overthinking it. It was a good poem.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
Comment from fretless
To be honest it was a little confusing to me trying to understand the point you were trying to get across, but I enjoyed reading it and it was well written. Maybe you can message me and explain what you meant in a simple way, if you care to.
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To be honest it was a little confusing to me trying to understand the point you were trying to get across, but I enjoyed reading it and it was well written. Maybe you can message me and explain what you meant in a simple way, if you care to.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is thought provoking spiritual poem and a finely accomplished acrostic. Great imagery and visuals, and thank you for your author notes.
I liked the image you've chosen. Thank you very much for sharing.
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This is thought provoking spiritual poem and a finely accomplished acrostic. Great imagery and visuals, and thank you for your author notes.
I liked the image you've chosen. Thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
Comment from palmart
Your work is really out of this World! Thanks for sharing! Reading it is really an experience! The artwork you have chosen to complement your writing has a powerful message as well!! You impact readers in two fronts. Recognition is totally deserved and more to come, for sure!!
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Your work is really out of this World! Thanks for sharing! Reading it is really an experience! The artwork you have chosen to complement your writing has a powerful message as well!! You impact readers in two fronts. Recognition is totally deserved and more to come, for sure!!
Comment Written 25-May-2021
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. This is a nice thought-provoking poem. I wish you well, have a wonderful day. ~Kerry
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Hello there, my friend. This is a nice thought-provoking poem. I wish you well, have a wonderful day. ~Kerry
Comment Written 24-May-2021
Comment from Jill McCauslin
I've read a lot of your poetry and I think this is one of my favorites. I also see that this was submitted a few years ago. It's amazing that it showed up on my list of poems to review! That's great. Keep on writing!
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I've read a lot of your poetry and I think this is one of my favorites. I also see that this was submitted a few years ago. It's amazing that it showed up on my list of poems to review! That's great. Keep on writing!
Comment Written 24-May-2021
Comment from TheTurtleDude
You wrote an acrostic poem, using the 4 words, in 14 lines. Wow! That's a lot of things to do in one poem! Not just that but your poem is amazing. Thanks for sharing.
TheTurtleDude
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You wrote an acrostic poem, using the 4 words, in 14 lines. Wow! That's a lot of things to do in one poem! Not just that but your poem is amazing. Thanks for sharing.
TheTurtleDude
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Ben1
I think this poem dose a good job at what it's meant to convey. That God is not meant to be understood by man. Especially nowadays it is so hard to just believe in something you can't see. But when you get that feeling inside that you truly know that there is more to life than what one sees it completely extraordinary. Good luck with the prompt.
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I think this poem dose a good job at what it's meant to convey. That God is not meant to be understood by man. Especially nowadays it is so hard to just believe in something you can't see. But when you get that feeling inside that you truly know that there is more to life than what one sees it completely extraordinary. Good luck with the prompt.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
