Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is fantastic for a first attempt Trisha, I am impressed. One little bit of advice, make sure that the important words are the one's that have the stress on them, I look forward to reading more of your sonnets and I enjoyed the sentiments in this one. Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Thanks for your supportive review, it?s very helpful
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written sonnet with a great topic about how we should live our lives the best we can every day because we do not know if we would be able to have another day to try again.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

It was easy for you! I appreciate you reviewing my penning
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I'm not a big free poetry fan but I immensely enjoyed this one. I never considered the night/day aspect of life being like ying/yang, that was a good point. I myself have used the want/need philosophy as a teacher and in the Army. Nice job!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you very much for your very supportive rview
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about making a heart-felt life, making the most of good use of the present in reality of 'now' somehow; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Hi faithful Alcreator, thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I love the simplicity and straightforward way you present your thoughts... It's refreshing not to have to jump in the maze of obscurity... I think this is lovely and would encourage you to keep your thoughts simple. Love it. yours, diana

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

I am flattered by your remarks. I guess simple is my style! I?m glad you enjoyed my first attemp, and thank you very much for your review, Diana
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. The sonnet is one of my favorite forms, both Shakespearean and Petrarchan. I usually see correct punctuation throughout; at least that is how I like to write mine. I won't bore you with talking about the volta, you'll have plenty of reviewers wanting to impress you with their obscure vocabulary whether they know what they are talking about or not. Keep writing! I am working to be a bit more prolific; I am sure practice makes perfect in this as in everything else!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you for your supportive review. I may tackle the challenge of a Shakespearean sonnet soon. I?m glad you liked this sonnet.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

Excellent for a first time attempt at this poetic style. Very well done with excellent photo artwork. I enjoyed it very much and cannot offer any ideas to improve it in any way. My thanks to this author for a fine read. ! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

You made my day, Vance, thanks so much!
Hugs, Trisha

reply by His Grayness on 18-Sep-2018

Hi Trisha...you always make MY day! So please keep the fine works coming! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance