A Whisper in Darkness
Dark shadows haunt a man since he was eighteen years old.7 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very strange night indeed! I am going to fan you and try to follow this. Well written and interesting, good pacing, I did not notice any errors. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Very strange night indeed! I am going to fan you and try to follow this. Well written and interesting, good pacing, I did not notice any errors. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you Kathleen. Sorry I hadn't answered earlier. Good luck on the contest yourself.
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You're welcome. No worries. Thanks!
Comment from country ranch writer
Time has not been good to him and he went through hell not entirely his own fault. Something had invaded his being and he couldn't figure what it was trying to tell him.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Time has not been good to him and he went through hell not entirely his own fault. Something had invaded his being and he couldn't figure what it was trying to tell him.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you Never Give Up. This is an old story getting dust in my computer. I revised it and revised it and still think it needs another tweak.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - now that is a really intriguing trip -- you have a great character set-up and I just love the 'ready to fight' ... after running from the fighting and the recognition, he's ready to go again! :) :) Just be sure to go in and fix that special character introduced by the editor in your second paragraph. :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Wow - now that is a really intriguing trip -- you have a great character set-up and I just love the 'ready to fight' ... after running from the fighting and the recognition, he's ready to go again! :) :) Just be sure to go in and fix that special character introduced by the editor in your second paragraph. :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! Yvette
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank You Yvette. I got got a couple of chapters. I was testing the waters with this one. With a name of Miguel Angel he is ready to fight.
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Then I certainly look forward to reading! :) ;) Please be sure to fire a 'heads-up' my way when you post! ;) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from damommy
What a dismal life this man has led. Interesting that his guardians a large cats. Finding out about the letter will be interesting. I wonder what his grandfather could have written that will have an impact on him at this time. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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What a dismal life this man has led. Interesting that his guardians a large cats. Finding out about the letter will be interesting. I wonder what his grandfather could have written that will have an impact on him at this time. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you damommy. Granpa's letter will be next.
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Looking forward to it.
Comment from Nanny 6
This is a awesome story... A good contender for the contest, so is there another chapter coming? that's my question of the day. I want to see what happens next, and what's in the letter. : )
Judy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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This is a awesome story... A good contender for the contest, so is there another chapter coming? that's my question of the day. I want to see what happens next, and what's in the letter. : )
Judy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you Nanny 6. I'm glad you liked it and yes there's a continuation.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. Wow! What a very compelling story you've penned. Seems the demons in his head took an overwhelming form. This is an entertaining story with an intriguing ending. Nicely done. Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Hello there, my friend. Wow! What a very compelling story you've penned. Seems the demons in his head took an overwhelming form. This is an entertaining story with an intriguing ending. Nicely done. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you Kerry. I'm glad you liked it.
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Very welcome:)
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest. This was very well written and definitely included a great deal of suspense, causing one to want to read more and more. You provided amazing details to allow the reader to analyze the characters mind set. Even though it was a dark subject it was still both educational and entertaining to read. Thanks so much for sharing Jose.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Good luck in the contest. This was very well written and definitely included a great deal of suspense, causing one to want to read more and more. You provided amazing details to allow the reader to analyze the characters mind set. Even though it was a dark subject it was still both educational and entertaining to read. Thanks so much for sharing Jose.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Well, Alie, I'm glad you liked it. I try to write nice things, but darkness is also there... whispering.
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You are most welcome.
