Redneck resume
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Comment from country ranch writer
Men never learn do they we can out do them and they still whine.men hate to admit it defeat that is.come on admit it gracefully she knew she had you over a barrel before she even started to prove you wrong!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Men never learn do they we can out do them and they still whine.men hate to admit it defeat that is.come on admit it gracefully she knew she had you over a barrel before she even started to prove you wrong!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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She usually does have me over a barrel from the get, she only bets when she knows she'll win and I keep falling for it. Thanks for the 5 star review and taking the time to read Redneck Resume.
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Smiles, I am married to a died in the wool true southerner lol
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, Earl, this was hilarious. I enjoyed reading it very much. I like Jeff Foxworthy, and can hear him saying his spiel. What a fun read. I am sure your wife loves her diamond earrings.
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Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Haha, Earl, this was hilarious. I enjoyed reading it very much. I like Jeff Foxworthy, and can hear him saying his spiel. What a fun read. I am sure your wife loves her diamond earrings.
NASCAR, what they likes (like) to hunt,
Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Thanks for reading and reviewing Jan. She usually does love diamonds especially when I let her pick and I don't go off on my own.
Comment from humpwhistle
Earl, I'm sorry about the four, but there are just too many punctuation gaffes for me to ignore. I suspect you posted this in haste. I'll be happy to reevaluate once you've done some editing.
Also, in the first paragraph, when you're ticking off 'their' tee-shirts, I'd suggest you change 'their' to 'his'.
This is funny, and I like the way you bring Harleys and wrestlers into the fray.
Let me know when you've edited.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Earl, I'm sorry about the four, but there are just too many punctuation gaffes for me to ignore. I suspect you posted this in haste. I'll be happy to reevaluate once you've done some editing.
Also, in the first paragraph, when you're ticking off 'their' tee-shirts, I'd suggest you change 'their' to 'his'.
This is funny, and I like the way you bring Harleys and wrestlers into the fray.
Let me know when you've edited.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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I appreciate input from writers I respect. I have gone back and tried to fix it the best I could. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Thank you, Earl. I changed my ranking to a five. You make Jeff Foxworthy proud. L
