Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Okay -- that's it -- no more coffee necessary to wake up further! That was PERFECT!! It would have been funny with your wonderfully chosen words and light, melodic flow there, but when you pair that prose with that pic? Oh, Craig, I am still grinning!! :) ;) Do you mind if I do a print-screen and hang it on the side of the bookcase here in my office? It really reminds me of some folks I know...and that word is WONDERFUL!! :) ;)
Thanx for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

As long as no one comes chasing after me with a shovel, you can do what you like with it, Yvette ;-)

Many thanks for the lovely comments.

Craig

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about some people who think they are the most important people on the earth and everyone has to bow down and serve them like kings or nothing.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

Thanks very much, Sandra. Yes, entitlement seems to be a growing feeling these days. Much appreciated -- Craig

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Gone Fishing?

I've known too many of your ilk,
your tongue as smooth as lovely silk.
But silk is spun by wriggling worm --
I bait my hook, and let it squirm... (*smirk*)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

That's it, I'm calling the SPCA! Worms are people too, you know.

Many thanks for a delightful poem ;-)

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Witty poem about a person who thinks he has style but doesn't. He is sure all the ladies love him because he wears designer clothes but they don't.

Keep writing

Joan

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

Thanks very much, Joan. You comments are most appreciated. Craig

reply by dragonpoet on 17-Sep-2018

You are so kindly welcome, Craig.

Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Today's word: mamamouchi is used naturally, innovatively and meaningfully placed; I enjoyed the rhymes and theme; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

Thank you very much for the kind comments -- appreciated. Craig