Comment from apky

Exceptional

Wow, you gave this one the correct title, Misty.

Super writing, tightly plotted, well constructed and paced. I feel really proud to read your work and see how much you've improved to the level of master story-teller!

Keep going, girl!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018

Thank you so much for your fantastic review and all your wonderful praise. That means so much to me, coming from you. I know that I wouldn't have improved if it wasn't for all of your help and for that I'll forever be grateful.
Thank you again for such a marvelous review all your help, support and friendship. They mean the world to me, take care.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Some mysteries reviled. Now what will Luigi do that he is trapped? I'm sure he'll think of something. Well done as always and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Rox

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you for your kind review. I'm so glad you continue to enjoy the story. Luigi is in deep for sure and the only thing that will save him is if he vanishes from sight somehow.

Thank you again for all of your help support and your friendship. It means a great deal to me, take care.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hello Mistydawn
My how I can feel the tension and the suspense building up in this chapter and you build them up so well from your previous chapters.
Gert

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you so much for your fantastic review and all your high praise, you made my week. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. There's a few chapters left and the suspense continues to build from here.
Thank you again for such a wonderful review, I am honored. Thank you for all your help support and friendship, take care.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Ah, ha! I knew it was Luigi and not Tito. Did Tito die at birth? Or is he alive as well? I have to keep reading the chapters I missed. I think there are about five more.

Good chapter, moving on...

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you for your great review. I can't fool you now can I? Guess I'll have to try harder next time, lol. No Tito is still very much alive in Italy with his mama. Bruno wasn't lying about that.
Thank you again for your wonderful review all your help and support, take care.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi there, this seems to be coming to a head.Airports and rails are closed. Blocks are in place on the roads, and they know who has falsified the Id's. I like the story. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you for such a wonderful review. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. You're right there's just a few chapters left to the end. I'm hoping they'll keep you on the edge of your seat to the end.
Thank you again for such a kind review all your help support and friendship, take care.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Bruno finds out the police have found out about Luigi holds a licence and a passport, as well as being dead at birth, so they've put a block at airports and road blocks, cutting off other forms of escape, Rachel has also escaped from her room, mmmh, the roads are narrowing, well done, blessjngs, Roy
Query Jeff pushes away from his desk. Jeff or Jerry? Typo "What do you want to do(,) now, sir?"

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

Thank you so much for your review. Do you feel the suspense building up? I hope so because the last three chapters are pretty action packed. I fixed the comma but it should be Jeff. He's the one who asked about going to the house, pushing for the raid hoping to figure out where he might go. Maybe I should look at that again, figure out how to make it clearer.
Thank you again for your kind review, all your help, support and friendship, take care.

reply by royowen on 17-Sep-2018

Most welcome, the suspense build up is fine.