Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I wonder what aspects of Cody threatened the assailant. I like your efforts at comedy relief: " He sniffed the aroma of small Jockey underwear. No brown streaks noted. Obviously, the snow-white briefs belonged to Cody." This is setting the plot up well.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022

Appreciated.

reply by Liz O'Neill on 13-Jun-2022

Well written

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Great insight into the Assassin's mind and his way of plotting and planning. He wants to kill the Sheriff and Beth, but especially Cody. He enjoys every moment of his trial run, and proves he can easily get into the house and leave without detection. An orderly life seems especially upsetting to him, as he notices how everything in the Sheriff's home is orderly. There seems to be a lot of envy behind his hatred. He's determined he's going to eliminate those three, and he has especially gruesome things in mind for Cody, with Daniels watching. Great chapter. judi

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanks.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was another well written chapter.
It read Well and Flowed well with no grammar issues as well.
Theme and Imagery were both excellent and exceptional.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were both beautiful ly handled while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024 and have a blessed
Day.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanks.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh no. You'd think the sheriff would keep his home more secure. I do hope this guy is caught soon! Well done as always. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Good descriptive storytelling. the detail on the Assassin's moves and his obsession with Cody's underwear and all that. I am glad I have been through the other version and sort of know where we are going. No spags.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

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Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Brett Matthew West
You know how to make us readers to keep coming back to read another chapter about Cody and the unknown killer and the question, why is he so much infatuated with Cody,
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

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Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

The man is a physo and definable you unbalanced.. Sneaking in undetected gives me the creeps and his fetish for cody's under is not natural.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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Comment from damommy

Excellent

That was certainly a chilling chapter. I'll have to go back and catch up. The sheriff doesn't seem to be very observant about his surroundings.

I laughed at my self when I read the piano on the screened-in porch. No one would put a piano outside. The weather would ruin it.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Brett, yeah it's well written and seen from the assassin's point of view. I just feel I've read all this before or am I totally wrong? Nevertheless I found no spags. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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Comment from fm wright

Excellent

A very enjoyable and exciting read letting the reader inside the Assassin's head. Obviously well planned out this is a wonderfully written chapter. I could see absolutely no flaws in it.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanks.

reply by fm wright on 17-Oct-2018

You're welcome.