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FAMILY TIES.

Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "And That's The Name Of That Tune."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from misscookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your write.
I would like to use the artwork in my one one day with your permission
20018 Sept.
my great grand daughter Madison's took her first ride on the school bus
her first day going to kindergarten
so you know this poem touched my dearly
thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
    HELLO MISSCOOKIE: Thank you for viewing my work. Thank you for the stars. My dear fellow writer. You have just as much right to use the art work here as I have. It is an honor for me that you like it enough to use it to enhance your work. Thank you for the many heart-warming reviews that you have given me, misscookie. I'd really like to respond to them all. But you being a writer...you know what I'm going through that slows me down. But I haven't forgotten about you. And I never will. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. You will find this art work listed under, "CHILDREN."
reply by misscookie on 16-Sep-2018
    Your very welcome and thank you for being so kind
    Have blessed Sunday
    cookie
Comment from Gert sherwood
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You are really good rhonnie69
with your rhyming names Marty and Smarty of how some times children have the wrong lyrics to a song and tell them the right words to
Our Country is of Thee
Gert

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
    HELLO GERT: As a children's writer I spend lots of time observing them and writing what I hear and see. I've discovered that if I spend as much time studying children's behavior as I do...eventually...I start thinking the way they think. Cordially: Your friend, rhonnie69.
reply by Gert sherwood on 16-Sep-2018
    You are welcome, yes you are right I was like you when I was teaching children, start thinking as they do.
    Gert
Comment from Rickie1
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Cute. You lost me until the last line and then made if all worth reading. Sure of heck didn't feel connected? But that could just be me. You made me smile.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fun dialogue with warm sentiments and when children learn a new song it can be uplifting especially if there is a moral to the story! He he he, you made me smile, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018