Secret Lover's Code Speak
how to communicate with discretion ...14 total reviews
Comment from poesyapprentice
OMG, I laughed so freakin' hard at the end that I just had to give you a six! The picture with the poetic writing was great, and then the mic dropped! Just fabulous! My oldest kids tell me I have no sense of humor, but, man, still laughing! Awesomeness!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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OMG, I laughed so freakin' hard at the end that I just had to give you a six! The picture with the poetic writing was great, and then the mic dropped! Just fabulous! My oldest kids tell me I have no sense of humor, but, man, still laughing! Awesomeness!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Aww ... you totally made my day. I'm so delighted you got a big laugh out of this! Your kids should realize, it takes Awesomeness to get a laugh out of you, yes? LOL Thanks a million. :)) mike
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But of course! : ) I'm glad I made your day, because your post made mine. Thanks! : )
Comment from BOO ghost
Love that movie, 'Full Metal Jacket.'
Yep, I had girls tell me the same thing in the Philippines.
I got to chuckle about this masterpiece or masturbating piece.
Is humorous how you out it.
I know this secret meaning
Good luck in the contest!
BOO!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Love that movie, 'Full Metal Jacket.'
Yep, I had girls tell me the same thing in the Philippines.
I got to chuckle about this masterpiece or masturbating piece.
Is humorous how you out it.
I know this secret meaning
Good luck in the contest!
BOO!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Love that movie too! Almost have it memorized. LOL
I'll keep my fingers crossed, one of those five days in the booth things. HAHAHA! Thank a million. :))
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Anytime, Lion King.
Comment from Linda Engel
This is a good one,Michael. So appropriate the words put forth in hidden meaning as your lure your potential maiden forth. I love the "bearded Kraken" and the mysterious Cervixia. That's a new one for sure. (hee hee). Very amusing all of these words to portray one sentence and I am of the age the age to know where that sentence came from. My husband says it all the time as Full Metal Jacket is one of his favorite movies. Fun and creative, Michael.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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This is a good one,Michael. So appropriate the words put forth in hidden meaning as your lure your potential maiden forth. I love the "bearded Kraken" and the mysterious Cervixia. That's a new one for sure. (hee hee). Very amusing all of these words to portray one sentence and I am of the age the age to know where that sentence came from. My husband says it all the time as Full Metal Jacket is one of his favorite movies. Fun and creative, Michael.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hi, Linda
Nice to see you. This was a great deal of fun to write. LOVED Full Metal Jacket, one of those movies I have virtually memorized. LOL So pleased you enjoyed this. Thanks a million. mike
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Some very descriptive phrasing in this one mike loved the - one-eyed trouser-trout - The not so secret, secret-message comes across in your well written poem, and certainly made me smile. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Some very descriptive phrasing in this one mike loved the - one-eyed trouser-trout - The not so secret, secret-message comes across in your well written poem, and certainly made me smile. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hi, Valda
Glad you got a smile out of this. Thanks a million. mike
Comment from RFL
Wow, Michael, you surely developed this secret message into an amazing poem. I just love your metaphors, e.g., "trouser-trout". Where did that one come from? Never heard of it. Interesting that you get some inspiration from Full Metal Jacket. We all find our inspirations some crazy places. Wait till you see where next I found mine. Anyhow, great work. I have no recommendations for enhancement. Best, RFL
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Wow, Michael, you surely developed this secret message into an amazing poem. I just love your metaphors, e.g., "trouser-trout". Where did that one come from? Never heard of it. Interesting that you get some inspiration from Full Metal Jacket. We all find our inspirations some crazy places. Wait till you see where next I found mine. Anyhow, great work. I have no recommendations for enhancement. Best, RFL
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Ahh ... I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this. I DID have a great time writing it. I often think, "Hmm ... that's crazy" when I've finished something. LOL Thanks a million. mike
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has wonderful metaphors. The double imagery is very powerful. You have good use of allusions also. And as you are so skilled at, this has the ancient writings' tone. It is a bit Shakespearean in its cloaked language, or not so. Very well written. I voted for this
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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This has wonderful metaphors. The double imagery is very powerful. You have good use of allusions also. And as you are so skilled at, this has the ancient writings' tone. It is a bit Shakespearean in its cloaked language, or not so. Very well written. I voted for this
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Ahh, so pleased you enjoyed. GREAT fun to write. Thanks a bunch. mike
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I'm very excited that my Chap No Good Home is up for book of month vote . It is in 2nd place with Make iuo sex leading. How can a wee bear compete with that. lol
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I've been following. Wow, you're holding your own with a couple heavyweights. A great showing. Still crossing my fingers. :))
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Thank you...I also wrote this on your review. Thank you so much
Comment from justafan
Hahaha! Hilarious!
"The payload a nuclear blast"!
This is totally you, Mikey. I've missed you and your writing.
Thank you for my first smile of the day!
Always Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hahaha! Hilarious!
"The payload a nuclear blast"!
This is totally you, Mikey. I've missed you and your writing.
Thank you for my first smile of the day!
Always Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hi, Missy
I'm not late with this, am I? Aww ... I'm so delighted you got a kick out of this. It was great fun to write. Good to see you here posting and reviewing. Thanks a million, mike. :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That warm affection can plant a seed that can change lives forever! He he he, this is a sensual and sexy write filled with passion and warmth and a joy to read, love Dolly x
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That warm affection can plant a seed that can change lives forever! He he he, this is a sensual and sexy write filled with passion and warmth and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Well, this is definitely a secret code I am not familiar with. I think I am happy about that. Your poem is very well written and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.
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Well, this is definitely a secret code I am not familiar with. I think I am happy about that. Your poem is very well written and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh very cryptic. What I found interesting is that the gender has been swapped. In full metal jacket it is the whore who makes the promise. Here it is the owner of the one-eyed trouser trout, the male of the species.
This below, sung to the tune of What a Friend We Have in Jesus offers the same idea - stamina is the thing. It was around in the 1960s and probably dates from a great deal earlier.
Sog of the Singapore Whore
Me no likee Blitish soldier
Yankee pay five dollar more
Yankee call me honey darling
Tommy call me feckin' whore
Yankee feck me once and finish
Tommy feck for evermore
Me no likee Blitish sodier
Yankee pay five dollar more.
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Oh very cryptic. What I found interesting is that the gender has been swapped. In full metal jacket it is the whore who makes the promise. Here it is the owner of the one-eyed trouser trout, the male of the species.
This below, sung to the tune of What a Friend We Have in Jesus offers the same idea - stamina is the thing. It was around in the 1960s and probably dates from a great deal earlier.
Sog of the Singapore Whore
Me no likee Blitish soldier
Yankee pay five dollar more
Yankee call me honey darling
Tommy call me feckin' whore
Yankee feck me once and finish
Tommy feck for evermore
Me no likee Blitish sodier
Yankee pay five dollar more.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
