Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Today is my birthday and I am attending a family reunion in Vacaville, in Northern California--so, your poem resonated in a personal way for me. Thank you for sharing more of your family history with us and happy belated special day to your daughter. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Joan.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Happy belated birthday to your daughter, such a nice story, and a wonderful tribute. Your words are heartwarming, and the piece is packed with emotion. Thanks for sharing this special part of your life.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Jaded.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a wonderful tribute and how lovely that you even know the day she was conceived! Such a sweet and touching write and you are blessed Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Dolly.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's such an adorable picture of your daughters, Patricia! Thank you for sharing your story of how your sweet Patty was conceived. Happy Birthday to her and hope you all celebrate her well.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Helen.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Hope it's a happy birthday for her. My late sister's birthday was September 9. She's been dead for many years now, but I certainly remember her on this day. Well written story, and a moving description of your experience. You discovered that things have a way of working out for the best. judi

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Judi.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a very sweet warm, heartfelt story about your youngest daughter. I imagine you did feel overwhelmed, I probably would've been in tears. I'm glad it turned out as well as it did. I hope she has a fantastic day.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Misty.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Dear Pat, this is my first time reading your work! I am new to FanStory and I am a Christian! I love stories of faith and family. I have three sons close in age like your daughters. How blessed we are. I hope to hear more from you. Kindest regards to you and your family, Sally Law

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Sally.

If you google Patricia Lawrence/ free indeed you will find the links to my life story done as a radio drama for Unshackled.

reply by Sally Law on 16-Sep-2018

Wonderful! I will check it out Pat, thank you.

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

A very touching and heartfelt piece. I hope your daughter has a fantastic birthday. Good piece here. I love the picture of your girls. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Sandy.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is a delightful birthday wish for your daughter. Lovely photo of all three. You must be very proud of them. I hope you are able to celebrate her birthday with her too. Happy Birthday Dear Patty.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Sasha.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very nicely written story about how Patty came to be. You used very sweet and loving words. I love the picture of your three children when they were small. Happy Birthday to you daughter, Patty! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you for your most lovely review, Teri.