From The Beginning...
Always meant to be12 total reviews
Comment from Dawnya
Yes, but do you really want him to wake up? I say give him decaf in his flagon, and then let sleeping dragons lie. :) Thanks for this humorous little poem.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Yes, but do you really want him to wake up? I say give him decaf in his flagon, and then let sleeping dragons lie. :) Thanks for this humorous little poem.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Funny -- when I write one of these short, unfamiliar styles, I actually write many different ones and then decide which one I will actually post for the contest. Sometimes, I change my mind after posting and go back and change...which is what happened here. Of course, the original was only up for 15 or 20 minutes before the little voice in the back of my head said that, once again, I had chosen the one that 'played' to the wrong audience - LOL! So, I went in and put the new one ... had no idea I had already received a review on the original post until I read through yours because, of course, the software simply put the new name at the top of the review! :) ;) Anywho, if you'd like, you can check out the new one by clicking on the title....either way, I just thank you for your wonderful review for the original dragon with his custom flagon and wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
Comment from meeshu
he is not alone. very clever and the rhyme is well shaped. goes nicely with the picture to give a great visual effect. good luck..
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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he is not alone. very clever and the rhyme is well shaped. goes nicely with the picture to give a great visual effect. good luck..
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Funny -- when I write one of these short, unfamiliar styles, I actually write many different ones and then decide which one I will actually post for the contest. Sometimes, I change my mind after posting and go back and change...which is what happened here. Of course, the original was only up for 15 or 20 minutes before the little voice in the back of my head said that, once again, I had chosen the one that 'played' to the wrong audience - LOL! So, I went in and put the new one ... had no idea I had already received a review on the original post until I read through yours because, of course, the software simply put the new name at the top of the review! :) ;) Anywho, if you'd like, you can check out the new one by clicking on the title....either way, I just thank you for your wonderful review for the original dragon with his custom flagon and wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
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just checked out the new one, quite a departure. better for the contest, I think.
