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Breakfast with Friends

rhyme

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Comment from nancyjam
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Sounds like a fun group. I enjoyed reading your rhyming description
of these get togethers.
I meet with a group of friends every Tuesday for breakfast so I know the
joys you experience.
Thanks for posting.
Nancy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
    Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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How fun! Now that you've got an "official write" for the group, you can each have a laminated card to identify yourself -- LOL!!! :) :) Be sure to let them share in your wonderful creation -- it certainly put a smile on my face and I'm not even in the group!! :) :) Thanx for sharing that grin! :)

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
    Love the idea of laminating the poem. I made little buttons for us. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Nanny 6
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There's nothing more fun than meeting together with friends for comfort food... I was hungry reading your poem... And got a real good feel of what a joy it is to meet with your friends. good rhyming and rhythm in this poem.
Judy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
    Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful review. Elaine
Comment from Aries Poet
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Always great to have friends that you can talk about your problems or good things happening in your life. Comfort food is always good, to help you relax, smile and laugh or have a good cry, knowing your friends will be by your side. Great poem. Keep enjoying your breakfast with friends!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
    Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Sandra blair
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I really like this poem. It's so lighthearted. I love the part about laughter emerging with the food. "Yummy glee" is a unique choice of words. Clever.
Thanks for sharing.
Take care,
Sandra :)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Good job, mermaids, with your sweet poem. Your group sounds like they have a lot of fun. Your couplets are good, the flow is goo, and your picture makes me want to rush out to the nearest diner and order pancakes with strawberries and whipped cream. I know a group that has been meeting for breakfast at Whataburger for 30 years.

suggestion:
chatting over luscious delights bring (brings) a smile

Thanks for sharing. Jan


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the suggestion and I appreciate your thoughtful review. Elaine
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi mermaids. I think a nursing home is in my future. It is nice to know some have nurses like you. I am retired now. But I have always been a loner. My disabilities make it hard to get around. I have found that coworkers I thought were friends have all deserted in favor of their busy lives. I understand. I have eight wonderful brothers and sisters, two kids and four grandkids. Just one good friend whom I know from work. I am happy for you. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
    To work in a nursing home , is a calling. Fortunately, most staff are caring individuals. Thanks for reading and reviewing. If a nursing home is in your future, I hope it is a great one. Thanks again. Elaine
Comment from Mark Schardine
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Thank you for sharing this insight into a weekly ritual. As with any good culinary poem. the reader is quite hungry after reading it.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
    Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Smiles mermaids
First I thought you were referring to your own family, I wish when I worked in a hosptial had that tasty breakfast that you have pictured
I'm sure your c-workers will love your poem, especially
laughter emerges with syrup, whip cream
coffee, tea, muffins, oh what a dream .
Gert

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
    A group of us meet in a restaurant every other Friday for breakfast and chat. The food is yummy along with good friends. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Spitfire
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What a great thing to look forward too. Your couplets detail the topics covered and the benefits of such a group. Comfort food and good company--I would love that.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
    Yes, I am attached to this group and of course the yummy breakfast. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine