FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Lost n Found.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from Earl Corp
You used a very nice graphic. I guess I'm not knowledgeable about children's poetry enough to be a good judge of what's good and what's not. For me poetry is something you get or you don't, I'm ashamed to say I didn't get this one.
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You used a very nice graphic. I guess I'm not knowledgeable about children's poetry enough to be a good judge of what's good and what's not. For me poetry is something you get or you don't, I'm ashamed to say I didn't get this one.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Rhonnie, you captured a precious moment between to innocent minds that have definitely set out between themselves for a great adventure. I love the artwork chosen and I love the simplicity and authenticity of the conversation between 2 innocent minds. that's what makes this poem so spectacular to me. Out of the mouths of babes is pure innocence, no hidden agendas or motives just genuine conversation. I love it
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Rhonnie, you captured a precious moment between to innocent minds that have definitely set out between themselves for a great adventure. I love the artwork chosen and I love the simplicity and authenticity of the conversation between 2 innocent minds. that's what makes this poem so spectacular to me. Out of the mouths of babes is pure innocence, no hidden agendas or motives just genuine conversation. I love it
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
