Call Father A Father!
A 13 Line Poem A great grandfather he-goat wants a name59 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a humorous poem, obviously written tongue in cheek and a challenge to easily comprehend, but obvious in its intended adherence to the prompt...
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In my opinion, a humorous poem, obviously written tongue in cheek and a challenge to easily comprehend, but obvious in its intended adherence to the prompt...
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from Artasylum
this is very cute... I love that these goats they are so very proper and civilized... so fun read and very good luck in your contest... and to you Namaste. Thanks yours, diana
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this is very cute... I love that these goats they are so very proper and civilized... so fun read and very good luck in your contest... and to you Namaste. Thanks yours, diana
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from kleck140
Sure is funny, how my mind follow it as though it
was relating to the Bible. However, I am not a poet
therefore my idea is off base. But it did make me chuckle.
Thanks for sharing.
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Sure is funny, how my mind follow it as though it
was relating to the Bible. However, I am not a poet
therefore my idea is off base. But it did make me chuckle.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from victor 66
This a very innovative, original and unique entry into the Poetry Telling A Joke writing contest. This is something that I never gave thought and does give one a chuckle. You put a nice twist on this entry and I wish you luck.
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This a very innovative, original and unique entry into the Poetry Telling A Joke writing contest. This is something that I never gave thought and does give one a chuckle. You put a nice twist on this entry and I wish you luck.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from Ulla
Hi Anonymous writer. I will admit right away that I don't get it. I understand every single word,but what is the joke? Please enlighten me. I would really like to get it. You fulfill all the requirements, and good luck in the contest. All best.Ulla:)))
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Hi Anonymous writer. I will admit right away that I don't get it. I understand every single word,but what is the joke? Please enlighten me. I would really like to get it. You fulfill all the requirements, and good luck in the contest. All best.Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the goats that never calls their father a father but they know instinctively who belongs where and who is who in the tribe of goats.
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A very well-written poem about the goats that never calls their father a father but they know instinctively who belongs where and who is who in the tribe of goats.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from RGstar
It feels as if this takes on a personal endeavor. Something, even if written in jest has a bigger meaning.
Always a focus when using sheep.
Good luck with this.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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It feels as if this takes on a personal endeavor. Something, even if written in jest has a bigger meaning.
Always a focus when using sheep.
Good luck with this.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from Joan E.
You used all the required words seamlessly as you told the story about the nameless goats. I liked the echo between "Namaste" and "nameless" and Daniel's concern! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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You used all the required words seamlessly as you told the story about the nameless goats. I liked the echo between "Namaste" and "nameless" and Daniel's concern! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from Sanku
I liked the names Bhya and Vyha .They sound like Indian names,especially since you have used the word 'Namaste'
Parliament of goats is seriously considering giving new names to their relationship.
You have succesfully managed to include the given words to create a humorous poem
All the best for the contest.
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I liked the names Bhya and Vyha .They sound like Indian names,especially since you have used the word 'Namaste'
Parliament of goats is seriously considering giving new names to their relationship.
You have succesfully managed to include the given words to create a humorous poem
All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi anon, well you have truly managed to use the words needed for this prompt. They are an eclectic assortment of words and not easy to put into a poem as well as the need for a humour poem. I had to read it twice to get the hang of it, I must confess. Nevertheless you have hit it off. I don't think I could have done so. Good Luck - regards Dorothy
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Hi anon, well you have truly managed to use the words needed for this prompt. They are an eclectic assortment of words and not easy to put into a poem as well as the need for a humour poem. I had to read it twice to get the hang of it, I must confess. Nevertheless you have hit it off. I don't think I could have done so. Good Luck - regards Dorothy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
