Call Father A Father!
A 13 Line Poem A great grandfather he-goat wants a name59 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I'm sure this was just as entertaining in the contest last year as it is now -- what an original topic for a contest: a goat that wants a name - delightfully odd and entertaining as heck! Thanx for sharing! ;)
  |
I'm sure this was just as entertaining in the contest last year as it is now -- what an original topic for a contest: a goat that wants a name - delightfully odd and entertaining as heck! Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a really fun poem. I think Daniel went about it the right way, getting parliament to pass a law. Goat image fits your poem perfectly. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
|
This is a really fun poem. I think Daniel went about it the right way, getting parliament to pass a law. Goat image fits your poem perfectly. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Sep-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
I will say I got a good laugh Alcreator Litt Dear
about your humor about getting ones goat what made me laugh is when they ask the They ask professor a long question, why none calls them father or mother and their family has a tradition of nameless relation.
Gert
do you have any new posting for me to read.
Gert
|
I will say I got a good laugh Alcreator Litt Dear
about your humor about getting ones goat what made me laugh is when they ask the They ask professor a long question, why none calls them father or mother and their family has a tradition of nameless relation.
Gert
do you have any new posting for me to read.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Sep-2018
Comment from Boogienights
You did an excellent job on what I consider a very hard prompt. This actually makes some sense and is quite funny! I had to great it a couple of times though. I like challenging poetry contests like this but rarely enter them, it's just too hard for me. Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you.
|
You did an excellent job on what I consider a very hard prompt. This actually makes some sense and is quite funny! I had to great it a couple of times though. I like challenging poetry contests like this but rarely enter them, it's just too hard for me. Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
Comment from ciliverde
I like this poem but I'm afraid I don't get the joke, help!! Who is Daniel and why is he worried at the end? Lol, I guess I'd be worried if a bunch of goats came and asked me a long question. Good luck in the contest, I cannot imagine trying to tell a joke in poetic form!
Carol
|
I like this poem but I'm afraid I don't get the joke, help!! Who is Daniel and why is he worried at the end? Lol, I guess I'd be worried if a bunch of goats came and asked me a long question. Good luck in the contest, I cannot imagine trying to tell a joke in poetic form!
Carol
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
Comment from Nanny 6
This had to be very difficult to come up with this poem that uses the required words to make it A joke. You did well at accomplishing this task, I wish you good luck in the contest
Judy
|
This had to be very difficult to come up with this poem that uses the required words to make it A joke. You did well at accomplishing this task, I wish you good luck in the contest
Judy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
Comment from Liberty Justice
What charrming poem about goats have a parliament assembly. Such funny story about storu playful goats running around in grass talking animals in session. Liberty justice
|
What charrming poem about goats have a parliament assembly. Such funny story about storu playful goats running around in grass talking animals in session. Liberty justice
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. You handled a difficult prompt well. Your presentation is nice--the font, the bold words, the picture. I'm not sure I understand all of the joke, though. But, I believe everyone wants to be proud of their name. Best wishes. Jan
|
Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. You handled a difficult prompt well. Your presentation is nice--the font, the bold words, the picture. I'm not sure I understand all of the joke, though. But, I believe everyone wants to be proud of their name. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Excellent, creative, NOT sure how you did it with what was given. You certainly know how to think outside the box. Thank you for the author notes. I learned something and that is great when the writer educates. I think you have a great chance of winning this!
Wendy
|
Excellent, creative, NOT sure how you did it with what was given. You certainly know how to think outside the box. Thank you for the author notes. I learned something and that is great when the writer educates. I think you have a great chance of winning this!
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
Comment from Raul1
Looks like Daniel got what he wanted. He tended to the sheep in this poem. I think I understood it. It looks clear what Daniel did in this poem. Excellent work!
|
Looks like Daniel got what he wanted. He tended to the sheep in this poem. I think I understood it. It looks clear what Daniel did in this poem. Excellent work!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
