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7 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the lady with different colored leaves to show the stages of life and how quickly things change from start to finish, as our lives start at birth and ends at death.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the lady with different colored leaves to show the stages of life and how quickly things change from start to finish, as our lives start at birth and ends at death.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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You give an interesting review for this one, thanks! I hope you are enjoying your Spring.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What a powerful message and poem. It seems as though she is boldly rejecting all who refuse to let her express that creative freedom. She is full of confidence and great pride.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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What a powerful message and poem. It seems as though she is boldly rejecting all who refuse to let her express that creative freedom. She is full of confidence and great pride.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you Shauna for your lovely interpretive review.
Hugs, Trish
Comment from fm wright
A very interesting picture to go with a most interesting poem. It should make a wonderful entry in the 2-4-2 contest for which I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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A very interesting picture to go with a most interesting poem. It should make a wonderful entry in the 2-4-2 contest for which I wish you the best.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I appreciate your wishes and compliments
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Sally Law
What a picture to set up your poetry! I love autumn, it's my favorite season. I never thought to make a dress from the fall foliage! This is very unique and creative. I am sure you will do well in the contest.
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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What a picture to set up your poetry! I love autumn, it's my favorite season. I never thought to make a dress from the fall foliage! This is very unique and creative. I am sure you will do well in the contest.
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you Sallyfor your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What an amazing dress! And your poem is poignant too! It's hard to get a message across in just 8 syllables, but you managed it Trisha, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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What an amazing dress! And your poem is poignant too! It's hard to get a message across in just 8 syllables, but you managed it Trisha, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I thank you for your kind review (8 syllables LOL) I?m bad !,,,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A great choice of image, Trisha.
-Syllable count is good.
-I think that model had her
work cut out with all of those
leaves; however, she is
stunning, as are the leaves
she is wearing!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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-A great choice of image, Trisha.
-Syllable count is good.
-I think that model had her
work cut out with all of those
leaves; however, she is
stunning, as are the leaves
she is wearing!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hi Pam, that image is so different from the usual subjects, I just had to use it! As to the contests, I think I?ve won the longest list of ?great entries?, but bottom prizes. I enter them so I can challenge myself with subjects. Thank you so much for reviewing positively
Hugs,Trisha
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You are welcome for the review, Trisha. That was a very intriguing picture. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from tfawcus
A life of beauty and leaves of beauty - a great combination! I just hope that she's not too cold when winter arrives! An original interpretation of the picture in your poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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A life of beauty and leaves of beauty - a great combination! I just hope that she's not too cold when winter arrives! An original interpretation of the picture in your poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I don?t suppose THAT photographer would mind LOL Thanks for a kind and humorous review
Hugs, Trisha
