Just a Speck !
Humorous 5/7/511 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Just a Speck, has the right set up and places mankind in the unenviable position of place-holder for the age of technology. We had our shot, I guess.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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This humorous 5-7-5, Just a Speck, has the right set up and places mankind in the unenviable position of place-holder for the age of technology. We had our shot, I guess.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is humorous and an interesting thought, Zanya. Your picture is a great pairing with your words. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good job and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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This is humorous and an interesting thought, Zanya. Your picture is a great pairing with your words. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Thanks for the accolade zanya
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a fun combination-robots, dinosaurs, and Homo Sapiens! I love the word choice, "twixt"... A nicely formatted 5-7-5 and your sense of humor is great for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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What a fun combination-robots, dinosaurs, and Homo Sapiens! I love the word choice, "twixt"... A nicely formatted 5-7-5 and your sense of humor is great for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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What a superb review ! thanks for reading zanya
Comment from JDRBAR
Well, that sure covers the spectrum of life doesn't it. I know, bots are really alive, but after watching some of them in action, I'm not so sure. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Well, that sure covers the spectrum of life doesn't it. I know, bots are really alive, but after watching some of them in action, I'm not so sure. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem. The dinosaurs were gigantic and were before us and the robots will come after us. We are just a spec and will not be speak of in the future.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem. The dinosaurs were gigantic and were before us and the robots will come after us. We are just a spec and will not be speak of in the future.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Yes amazing to think about the cycle of life or machines !thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Ogden
Your speckishness complex is a sign of humility, an admirable trait in a human person (which you undoubtedly are). But don't let compliments go to your head, which is a common human failing.
Good luck in the contest!
Don
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Your speckishness complex is a sign of humility, an admirable trait in a human person (which you undoubtedly are). But don't let compliments go to your head, which is a common human failing.
Good luck in the contest!
Don
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Nice tongue-in-cheek tone !! thanks for reading zanya
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All in fun. You're welcome, Zanya.
Don
Comment from Lady Jane
Haha, there are many cute, humorous poems of this kind floating around the site today. This one is so fun and I love the picture you've chosen to accent the write. Yes, we do kind fit somewhere in the millennium between the two, don't we? Haha
Good structure, excellent verbiage, nice energy and presentation. I wish you al the best in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Haha, there are many cute, humorous poems of this kind floating around the site today. This one is so fun and I love the picture you've chosen to accent the write. Yes, we do kind fit somewhere in the millennium between the two, don't we? Haha
Good structure, excellent verbiage, nice energy and presentation. I wish you al the best in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Great reveiw -thanks for reading zanya
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Do NOT BE jealous. Why does the editor do that (smacking my head in disbelief) lol
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and why not I watched a movie called " cowboys and aliens" why not "dinosaurs and bots" great artwork as well, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Excellent and why not I watched a movie called " cowboys and aliens" why not "dinosaurs and bots" great artwork as well, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Great review zanya
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Very good poem. I love the concept of where the planet has been and where it is going. Two scary creatures that sandwich the most dangerous of all; humans. Good luck in the contest. Hugh
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Very good poem. I love the concept of where the planet has been and where it is going. Two scary creatures that sandwich the most dangerous of all; humans. Good luck in the contest. Hugh
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Yes indeed ! thanks for reading zanya
Comment from meeshu
it is so true, but what a speck. this is quite good given the inherent limitations in the format of Haiku. good luck in the contest..
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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it is so true, but what a speck. this is quite good given the inherent limitations in the format of Haiku. good luck in the contest..
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
