You Gotta Show Up
Based on a true story38 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
Most people don't have the grit to stick with it like you did. They accept the doctor's diagnosis and wallow in self-pity.
Recover and even maintenance can be painful, but like you said you had a goal. I liked the idea of collecting race-shirts, making a woobie and showing the doctor that you DID it.
This success story should give courage to those who might hesitate in their recovery.
Way to go!
Fine writing.
:) ellen
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Most people don't have the grit to stick with it like you did. They accept the doctor's diagnosis and wallow in self-pity.
Recover and even maintenance can be painful, but like you said you had a goal. I liked the idea of collecting race-shirts, making a woobie and showing the doctor that you DID it.
This success story should give courage to those who might hesitate in their recovery.
Way to go!
Fine writing.
:) ellen
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thanks for reading. To date I've done 54 5Ks and the T-shirts are at my wife's aunt's to be put together.
Comment from Sefiros
A very engaging story. I myself am physically disabled so I know how frustrating therapy can be. I don't usually nitpick but there are a few grammar errors. I don't see a period separating sentences in the first three sentences. I would also suggest putting your section titles (Road To Recovery) in bold-type. That would make the following paragraphs stand out and will help the reader keep track of the stages/milestones of your story. Good job. I look forward to more writing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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A very engaging story. I myself am physically disabled so I know how frustrating therapy can be. I don't usually nitpick but there are a few grammar errors. I don't see a period separating sentences in the first three sentences. I would also suggest putting your section titles (Road To Recovery) in bold-type. That would make the following paragraphs stand out and will help the reader keep track of the stages/milestones of your story. Good job. I look forward to more writing.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thanks for your pointers. I couldn't find a way to bold the headers in the story, they were bolded in my original
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, you showed the world they did not know your tenacity. Your story read well. It is organized logically and interesting. I did not think it was too long. You had some great people around you (Anna, for one) to motivate you plus your own determination. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Well, you showed the world they did not know your tenacity. Your story read well. It is organized logically and interesting. I did not think it was too long. You had some great people around you (Anna, for one) to motivate you plus your own determination. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from mermaids
You are such an inspiration. I enjoyed reading your story, you just kept going despite all the obstacles. This is a great story for others who have back/hip/ leg issues. There can be a light at the end of the tunnel and I congratulate you on your medals.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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You are such an inspiration. I enjoyed reading your story, you just kept going despite all the obstacles. This is a great story for others who have back/hip/ leg issues. There can be a light at the end of the tunnel and I congratulate you on your medals.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from kiwijenny
kidneys cost me another month on the hospital. ...in not on
Wow you had to parallel park...you get a six from me for tenacity, sheer stubborn will.
God bless you for this. I am so proud to read this.
God bless
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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kidneys cost me another month on the hospital. ...in not on
Wow you had to parallel park...you get a six from me for tenacity, sheer stubborn will.
God bless you for this. I am so proud to read this.
God bless
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent. You show what can be done with determination and willpower. You prove the saying never underestimate the impossible. Other people will be given hope by you.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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This is excellent. You show what can be done with determination and willpower. You prove the saying never underestimate the impossible. Other people will be given hope by you.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from meeshu
this is a really great story of perseverance and determination. and finally redemption, yes there is glory in last place. I enjoyed your tale and your quest, Earl..................meeshu
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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this is a really great story of perseverance and determination. and finally redemption, yes there is glory in last place. I enjoyed your tale and your quest, Earl..................meeshu
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Hugh McDowell
What an inspiring story. At any point you could have given up and accepted the doctors advice. Good on you for refusing to give up. The story reads very well. Good pace and flow. Every day we get up and continue we win. One question, what's a woobie! Excellent. Hugh
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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What an inspiring story. At any point you could have given up and accepted the doctors advice. Good on you for refusing to give up. The story reads very well. Good pace and flow. Every day we get up and continue we win. One question, what's a woobie! Excellent. Hugh
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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A woobie is a blankie ,Any object, typically a blanket, garment or stuffed animal that is used simply for its comforting characteristics.
