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FAMILY TIES.

Viewing comments for Chapter 74 "Jack and Jill."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

2 total reviews 
Comment from RodG
Excellent
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Short and silly reprise of the classic Jack and Jill nursery rhyme. It did make me chuckle and I find your rhyme inventive. I am not sure this will receive a G-rating for all audiences, however.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2018

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I LOVE IT! LOL What a clever way of leaving a door opened for imagination and humor to sneak in. Although you didnt mention how Jilll got Jacks $1.25 I"m sure that Jack was the happiest broke guy in the world. Hagahahaha!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2018