Be Wee With Bea
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Dirt Path"An allegory in the Winnie the Pooh genre
13 total reviews
Comment from SueZen
Oh boy, I really feel ONE with wee Bea, on the same dirt path, but turned into
a Golden Path, full of discovery, adventure, encounters of others who had left
their foot prints on the path. Such recognition, wonder, whilst wandering
and not forgetting to exercise body, mind and spirit on the way.
Your imagination is boundless, which makes your narratives such a delight to read.
They take me into wonderful "world", one which enlightens, fills me with joy, hope and happiness, one I try and wish to follow as Wee Me, but preferably without feeling overwhelmed on my way and Wee Bea helps me with.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Oh boy, I really feel ONE with wee Bea, on the same dirt path, but turned into
a Golden Path, full of discovery, adventure, encounters of others who had left
their foot prints on the path. Such recognition, wonder, whilst wandering
and not forgetting to exercise body, mind and spirit on the way.
Your imagination is boundless, which makes your narratives such a delight to read.
They take me into wonderful "world", one which enlightens, fills me with joy, hope and happiness, one I try and wish to follow as Wee Me, but preferably without feeling overwhelmed on my way and Wee Bea helps me with.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Oh, wow. This is so sweet of a review. I'm glad you are feel healed by journeying with Bea. That is one of my intents. When people ask what I hope for when people read this book, I say that they experience healing. And thank you for the six stars too.
Comment from Beck Fenton
I must say I enjoyed the story very much. I think not capitalizing really made the story flow better for me.
I love the discovery of self and the importance and permanence we have in and on this world. You've captured beautifully the joy of an inner free child as Bea explores new things and cherishes the old.
Good job!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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I must say I enjoyed the story very much. I think not capitalizing really made the story flow better for me.
I love the discovery of self and the importance and permanence we have in and on this world. You've captured beautifully the joy of an inner free child as Bea explores new things and cherishes the old.
Good job!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. It's good to know you are always rooting for me. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As soon as I make enough member $$ I'll put the next one on.
Comment from l.d.lauritzen
It wasn't what I expected. Kind of a children's story. Nice twist of the wee bear discovering her own tracks.
Maybe end: Sometimes the playful whistling wind erased her tracks, but Bea wouldn't be discouraged. She would keep coming back.
Keep writing
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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It wasn't what I expected. Kind of a children's story. Nice twist of the wee bear discovering her own tracks.
Maybe end: Sometimes the playful whistling wind erased her tracks, but Bea wouldn't be discouraged. She would keep coming back.
Keep writing
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thank you for comprehensive review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Kelly Grim
I really enjoyed reading this -- I haven't read any of the other chapters, so I'm jumping in here a bit blind. This notion that footprints are a mark we leave behind, evidence of us, is a really good one! And that Bea is excited to come upon this and to want to leave her mark is so sweet and so well written. Your writing flows and it's soothing to read! Just really really well done here!!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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I really enjoyed reading this -- I haven't read any of the other chapters, so I'm jumping in here a bit blind. This notion that footprints are a mark we leave behind, evidence of us, is a really good one! And that Bea is excited to come upon this and to want to leave her mark is so sweet and so well written. Your writing flows and it's soothing to read! Just really really well done here!!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you discovered Bea and enjoyed her. I'm glad you saw the metaphor. It is a bit of a spiritual journey throughout and I hope is soothing and healing.
Comment from Sally Law
This was so sweet and delightful! I think this is my first review of your work, as I am new to FanStory. I love your writing style! I think, it's because I am a child at heart. Very well done.
All my best to you and your family,
Sally
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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This was so sweet and delightful! I think this is my first review of your work, as I am new to FanStory. I love your writing style! I think, it's because I am a child at heart. Very well done.
All my best to you and your family,
Sally
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you discovered Bea and enjoyed her. I'm glad you saw one of my intents, to speak to the child within. It is a bit of a spiritual journey throughout and I hope is soothing and healing.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this is just precious!! :) ;) I do hope that you are planning to put these together in an illustrated book for children or something....okay, I'm an adult and I love them so, I can just imagine how an actual child would feel!! :) ;) I love Bea and her simplistic optimism...reminds me so much of some of my special students!! Thank you - Thank you for the smile today and always!! :) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Oh, this is just precious!! :) ;) I do hope that you are planning to put these together in an illustrated book for children or something....okay, I'm an adult and I love them so, I can just imagine how an actual child would feel!! :) ;) I love Bea and her simplistic optimism...reminds me so much of some of my special students!! Thank you - Thank you for the smile today and always!! :) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for your enthusiastic and supportive review. You actually read more about my book on this link where I self-published. There are no pictures because I want readers to muse there imagination. www.beweewith bea.com
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Liz. Your writing is always very well composed, clear and interesting. I guess dirt paths can always become golden ones with the right attitude taken. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Hi Liz. Your writing is always very well composed, clear and interesting. I guess dirt paths can always become golden ones with the right attitude taken. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for your enthusiastic and supportive review. I appreciate your interest.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I love these cute Wee Bea stories. This is very cute with her seeing her footprints and being so excited that other will see them. Well done. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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I love these cute Wee Bea stories. This is very cute with her seeing her footprints and being so excited that other will see them. Well done. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for your enthusiastic and supportive review. I appreciate your anticipation.
Comment from WildWithWords
Obviously a short story directed at the younger age groups (boy is that an understatement) but it has all the elements you would look for with such a story. A naive innocence within the central character, something of a mystery to keep the kids interested along the way and a happy ending to leaves smiles on their faces and a good feeling for conquering their next school work.
You're obviously good at this (yes I noticed your CV in profile).
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Obviously a short story directed at the younger age groups (boy is that an understatement) but it has all the elements you would look for with such a story. A naive innocence within the central character, something of a mystery to keep the kids interested along the way and a happy ending to leaves smiles on their faces and a good feeling for conquering their next school work.
You're obviously good at this (yes I noticed your CV in profile).
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for your enthusiastic and supportive review. I appreciate you extended thinking.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hi Liz, this is lovely engaging writing, and I thought your description of the wind was excellent. An endearing read for all ages, with good grammar, spelling, and punctuation. I noticed no errors, and feel this is a five-star story and it is published very professionally with the picture and an interesting title.
Cheers, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Hi Liz, this is lovely engaging writing, and I thought your description of the wind was excellent. An endearing read for all ages, with good grammar, spelling, and punctuation. I noticed no errors, and feel this is a five-star story and it is published very professionally with the picture and an interesting title.
Cheers, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Ana, good to see you again. Thank you so much for your enthusiastic and supportive review. I appreciate your encouraging comments.
