Funny Honey
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
An interesting take on the definition of humor -- certainly enjoyed the 'back and forth' between Loosie and Sicky and the play on words from Lucy and Ricky! A great creation and your presentation and prose are done well! :) ;)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
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An interesting take on the definition of humor -- certainly enjoyed the 'back and forth' between Loosie and Sicky and the play on words from Lucy and Ricky! A great creation and your presentation and prose are done well! :) ;)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
Comment from heart of Lou
You managed to write a great humorous story about the forbidden apple. In the fourth stanza, you could drop the comma. And in the following one, Loosie doesn't have a capital 'L'. Good luck with the contest.
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You managed to write a great humorous story about the forbidden apple. In the fourth stanza, you could drop the comma. And in the following one, Loosie doesn't have a capital 'L'. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
