The Secret of Happiness!
A 15 Word Poem; Give, but expect nothing in return132 total reviews
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great advice from the seer and the poet. I like the rose
and the always give more. We need to help others and be
happy. I enjoy feeding my birds and watching them. They
are happy. I hope pres t sees your poem. Great entry.
flylikeaneagle
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Great advice from the seer and the poet. I like the rose
and the always give more. We need to help others and be
happy. I enjoy feeding my birds and watching them. They
are happy. I hope pres t sees your poem. Great entry.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
A lovely sentiment is depicted in your theme. A great submission for the 15 Word Poem. It flows well and is beautifully presented as well. Good luck.
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A lovely sentiment is depicted in your theme. A great submission for the 15 Word Poem. It flows well and is beautifully presented as well. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Well what a love non-acrostic poem it is, author, even though the first letter of the words do spell a word. Beautiful presentation, but then who doesn't just love a rose.
Best wishes to you in the contest and many thanks to you for sharing. :)
Gloria
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Well what a love non-acrostic poem it is, author, even though the first letter of the words do spell a word. Beautiful presentation, but then who doesn't just love a rose.
Best wishes to you in the contest and many thanks to you for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise spiritual words and giving gives us an overwhelming feeling of eurphoria that lasts and we always get it back in some way from some other like-minded person, and so the cycle of happiness continues, love Dolly x
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Wise spiritual words and giving gives us an overwhelming feeling of eurphoria that lasts and we always get it back in some way from some other like-minded person, and so the cycle of happiness continues, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Shreya Ramanathan
Nice work! I really liked the rhyme scheme and such a nice theme in just 15 words. I liked how the visuals complemented the text. All the best for the contest.
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Nice work! I really liked the rhyme scheme and such a nice theme in just 15 words. I liked how the visuals complemented the text. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from kriver
Hi,
Interesting writing challenge.
your short five words though
Does the contest state that
the wording can be less
otherwise you might have
to add some words
Kind of neat that it turned out
to be an unintended acrostic
Overall, I think it is a good poem
Best regards,
K River
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Hi,
Interesting writing challenge.
your short five words though
Does the contest state that
the wording can be less
otherwise you might have
to add some words
Kind of neat that it turned out
to be an unintended acrostic
Overall, I think it is a good poem
Best regards,
K River
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from tfawcus
You have a seriously wise seer there! Giving without any thought of return is a fine way of finding happiness. I have often found that it is the givers of this world who are the most happy. I enjoyed this short poem.
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You have a seriously wise seer there! Giving without any thought of return is a fine way of finding happiness. I have often found that it is the givers of this world who are the most happy. I enjoyed this short poem.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from l.raven
so very true...give all you can...know in your heart you are making someone happy...and you will be happy...love your poem...very nicely written...and love this picture...love Linda xxoo
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so very true...give all you can...know in your heart you are making someone happy...and you will be happy...love your poem...very nicely written...and love this picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from His Grayness
I found this to be a very well presented work with excellent artwork and coloration at the outset and although intentioned by contest, a very brief and well delivered work of simple, yet profound wisdom! I have no suggestions to improve this work in any way and thank this author for a fine read. HIS GRAYNESS
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I found this to be a very well presented work with excellent artwork and coloration at the outset and although intentioned by contest, a very brief and well delivered work of simple, yet profound wisdom! I have no suggestions to improve this work in any way and thank this author for a fine read. HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Anon, this is a nicely published and written poem for the contest and best o luck with your entry. I loved the mood of the poem and only have one suggestion for improvement and that is this line here:
Give always more
I would write: Always give more
Just a thought and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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Hello Anon, this is a nicely published and written poem for the contest and best o luck with your entry. I loved the mood of the poem and only have one suggestion for improvement and that is this line here:
Give always more
I would write: Always give more
Just a thought and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
