Comment from Popcorn69

Excellent

I read this twice and laugh out loud both times. I like your author notes about spelling egotistical wrong on purpose, you definitely made your point. I like your online name of "Bucketlist", and I look forward to reading more of your writing. I like your wit in his poem. Your pacing and flow were easy to follow. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018

Welcome Popcorn! I really appreciated your review. The facts that MY poem TITilated you, and your review was complimentary both made my day.. I love ?play on words? humor
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written loop poem about males that also age and lose most of their good looks and body muscles that turn into fat, we are not alone ladies, the gentlemen suffer the same effects of gravity.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018

It?s called equality haha! Thanks for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisga

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

This is hilarious!! :) ;) It's almost the same thoughts that go through one's mind when you hear all those ads on TV and on the radio for the 'male enhancement' supplements and prescriptions -- are you kidding me? :) ;) And your spelling of 'egotesticle'? Priceless! :) ;) Yep, a banana cannot be substituted for a hammer no matter how much some would like it to be .... :) :)

This is a great employment of this style -- it is one that I have certainly not mastered or even fully see how you 'experts' manage it, but this is awesome! :) ;)

Thank you so very much for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018

Thanks very much for your amused review. I?m glad you enjoyed the read.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love the sentiments here Trisha, the third stanza, fourth line, you missed the word (apply) at the beginning to complete the loop, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thanks for being so astute!
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

I beg to differ. This is definitely fun, but also very honest and moving. A sincere account of the aging male in reliving his glory days. Wonderful photo to boot!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thanks Shauna, I appreciate your positive review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from phil nelson

Excellent

Ha! This was a bit of fun, and as an aging male, a little pointed too! Well done --the picture is perfect --good luck in the contest

All the best

Phil

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thank you Phil for your positive review and good luck wish.
Hugs, Trisha