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Love hurts

Love Poem

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Comment from A Fractal Heart
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What a great poem. You've said so much in so little space. Divorce is an emotionally difficult, complex, and convoluted process. It's difficult to accept that we can no longer be with someone we once loved so much.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018
    Yes indeed --thanks for this most encouraging reveiw zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
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This love poem, Love Hurts, has me on the fence about its effectiveness. The final two words, I think, should be 'is in'. You have 'nisi'. That needs to be changed in order for you to win. Happy day.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018
    What about Decree Nisi ? Thanks for reading ..much appreciated Zanya