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Thoughts About Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Our Love"
My Collection of Love Poetry

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great presentation, Bucketlist. I really like the picture. Good job with 'v' alliteration. This reads well and speaks of love between two who are in love. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
    Jan, I am honored by your compliments.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from heart of Lou
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This is a great entry for the Love contest in fifteen words. There is the sensation of warmth because she/ he knows they are loved, and the love is mirrored back. Beautiful.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
    Thanks for your complimentary review. I?m glad you enjoyed my penning.
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written love poem in only fifteen words. When the love is true, we don't need too many words to tell our loved one how we feel about them, they already know from our actions.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
    I appreciate your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rickie1
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Very nice and very true. Nicely done. The picture is nice but I think poetry is best left to the imagination.

I'm new here and I guess these have to be 150 words long? Sorry for the fluff.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
    Hi. Rickie, presentation is left to the poet?s choice. So you can write without images. This contest was for 15 or under words. It seems a bit confusing at first because usually the contest guideline is for more . Welcome and thanks for your review
Comment from A Fractal Heart
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A touching poem and a solid contest entry. I wish the best of luck to you! I like that you incorporated alliteration, it gives a short piece more substance.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
    Thanx
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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What a magical piece of poetry this is. You communicate the very connection two souls long for and do it with brevity and grace. Just lovely. The structure is also lovely to read.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
    Thanx