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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Faith not Fear"A collection of award winning poems
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Comment from Benny Beeharry
There is a lot of solid proof here of wanting to learn, and this is the beginning of wisdom. This you found in the statement of your wife, great it s faith not fear. What will come will come whether you fear or not or whether your faith is weak or not. But the better between the two is faith, it brings tranquility and peace of mind....and heart.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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There is a lot of solid proof here of wanting to learn, and this is the beginning of wisdom. This you found in the statement of your wife, great it s faith not fear. What will come will come whether you fear or not or whether your faith is weak or not. But the better between the two is faith, it brings tranquility and peace of mind....and heart.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
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You are absolutely correct. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from dmt1967
This is another great faith poem. I like the way this one flows and the structural foundations are very sturdy. This is a very good poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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This is another great faith poem. I like the way this one flows and the structural foundations are very sturdy. This is a very good poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Earl, I enjoyed reading this short poem on faith. It is a good entry for the competition because it relates to you and your life story and path to faith. A simple, straight forward and relatable piece. I think your wife is an admirer of your work... good on her. I'd give her a ten :-)
Good job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
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Earl, I enjoyed reading this short poem on faith. It is a good entry for the competition because it relates to you and your life story and path to faith. A simple, straight forward and relatable piece. I think your wife is an admirer of your work... good on her. I'd give her a ten :-)
Good job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
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I'm sure she'd appreciate that. Thank you very much, appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, there are no better critics than those in our own families, Earl.
My daughter, Chelsea, is not only my biggest fan she is also my staunchest critic.
If she feels I've butchered a poem's meter or the plot line story she'll really let me have it!
If we put our faith in mankind and the things of this world we are going to be in for a serious let down.
If we put our faith in Christ, however, we simply can't go wrong.
Best of luck to you in the Faith Poetry Contest.
~Dean
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Hey, there are no better critics than those in our own families, Earl.
My daughter, Chelsea, is not only my biggest fan she is also my staunchest critic.
If she feels I've butchered a poem's meter or the plot line story she'll really let me have it!
If we put our faith in mankind and the things of this world we are going to be in for a serious let down.
If we put our faith in Christ, however, we simply can't go wrong.
Best of luck to you in the Faith Poetry Contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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You are absolutely correct. Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. The video you attached was cool!
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My pleasure, good work!
~Dean
Comment from LIJ Red
The glimpse into their own open grave brings some men to faith, and drives others from it. One thing seems sure, faith must often stand on its own. Interesting string of rhyming couplets, very much to prompt.
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The glimpse into their own open grave brings some men to faith, and drives others from it. One thing seems sure, faith must often stand on its own. Interesting string of rhyming couplets, very much to prompt.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
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Your remarks about faith are absolutely correct. Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from red6560
Great poem. I like the flow and rhythm of it. It made me think of my mortality. We may see Christ sooner than we thought. My favorite is "faith not fear" .
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Great poem. I like the flow and rhythm of it. It made me think of my mortality. We may see Christ sooner than we thought. My favorite is "faith not fear" .
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. Faith not Fear is my next tattoo.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, earl, I love this faith contest entry you've penned. A very endearing story. You should definitely enter some more contests. I wish you the best of luck!
~Kerry
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Hello there, earl, I love this faith contest entry you've penned. A very endearing story. You should definitely enter some more contests. I wish you the best of luck!
~Kerry
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thanks i entered two others, one I won the other I wss disqualified because I entered a rhyming poem in a free verse contest. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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My pleasure, sorry for the late reply.
Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from kleck140
Although I am not your wife, I think you deserve six stars.
You make the lines rhyme so nicely. It was a fun read and
so true to my spirit. Keep on writing poems
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Although I am not your wife, I think you deserve six stars.
You make the lines rhyme so nicely. It was a fun read and
so true to my spirit. Keep on writing poems
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much for honoring me with a six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Like your wife, I really like this poem. I like your line that it's faith not fear. Good one to pick for your title. And I like the admonition to store doubts. Personally, I would bury them. Why keep them around?
I can't believe that this is your first attempt at poetry. Great job.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Like your wife, I really like this poem. I like your line that it's faith not fear. Good one to pick for your title. And I like the admonition to store doubts. Personally, I would bury them. Why keep them around?
I can't believe that this is your first attempt at poetry. Great job.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you Debbie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Lady Jane
Blessings to your wife for helping to move you in a better direction. Solid rhyme, conviction is sound and delightful, image works well with the Faith theme required in the prompt. Thanks for granting the reader a short glimpse into your world. Which, from what I've seen, has taken a turn for the better. Well done and good luck in the contest, Earl
Janelle
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Blessings to your wife for helping to move you in a better direction. Solid rhyme, conviction is sound and delightful, image works well with the Faith theme required in the prompt. Thanks for granting the reader a short glimpse into your world. Which, from what I've seen, has taken a turn for the better. Well done and good luck in the contest, Earl
Janelle
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you Janelle. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
