Wise Bards
A 26 Word Poem in 8 Lines Read Author Notes Bards on wisdom73 total reviews
Comment from jdrhye
Nicely executed and articulated. It is witty and quite clever. I like the way it rolls off the tongue when reading. Nice flow and tone as well. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed the read.
J
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Nicely executed and articulated. It is witty and quite clever. I like the way it rolls off the tongue when reading. Nice flow and tone as well. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed the read.
J
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from heart of Lou
It appears you followed all the required guidelines and came up with an interesting sounding poem about the wisdom of the bard. As long as we sound wise, we don't really have to be wise!
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It appears you followed all the required guidelines and came up with an interesting sounding poem about the wisdom of the bard. As long as we sound wise, we don't really have to be wise!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
I like your entry for this prompt and enjoyed your expose' of what a bard is and what a bard expresses. Well done. I wish you good luck with your verse.
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I like your entry for this prompt and enjoyed your expose' of what a bard is and what a bard expresses. Well done. I wish you good luck with your verse.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Mr. Contestant;
> First became aware of which are grammatical mistakes in the first two lines.
>I believe It is "words reveal" not "words reveal(S)".
>Good luck in the contest my friend, and take care have a good one above you aware that you may have to change some of your grammar.
> Good luck
Alx
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Cheers, Mr. Contestant;
> First became aware of which are grammatical mistakes in the first two lines.
>I believe It is "words reveal" not "words reveal(S)".
>Good luck in the contest my friend, and take care have a good one above you aware that you may have to change some of your grammar.
> Good luck
Alx
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from rspoet
Wisdom is a very elusive thing and therein lies the conundrum
I doubt that poets have any greater wisdom than others
Whether one's words reveal wisdom may depend on the wisdom of the reader.
Interesting topic.
Good luck in the contest
RS
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Wisdom is a very elusive thing and therein lies the conundrum
I doubt that poets have any greater wisdom than others
Whether one's words reveal wisdom may depend on the wisdom of the reader.
Interesting topic.
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from dmt1967
I like the fact there is no punctuation and therefore no pressure to read the poem a certain way. This, in my opinion, makes reading it easier. I loved the picture. Thank you for sharing and thank you for sharing.
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I like the fact there is no punctuation and therefore no pressure to read the poem a certain way. This, in my opinion, makes reading it easier. I loved the picture. Thank you for sharing and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from TPAC
Definite holding interest to presented flow, finding repetition of wisdom a big swallow.
Suggest:
Reveals value of my knowledge
Poetised frolics
Just my opinion of this particular write. Good read.
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Definite holding interest to presented flow, finding repetition of wisdom a big swallow.
Suggest:
Reveals value of my knowledge
Poetised frolics
Just my opinion of this particular write. Good read.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Sanku
a good entry for the competition. has observed the necessary word count in each line
Thought provoking too. Poets though indulging in their flight of fancy, gave us a lot of life lessons
when each one of us write, the words churn out of our experiences and the conundrums that have kept our brains active..
well chosen words. All the best for the contest.
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a good entry for the competition. has observed the necessary word count in each line
Thought provoking too. Poets though indulging in their flight of fancy, gave us a lot of life lessons
when each one of us write, the words churn out of our experiences and the conundrums that have kept our brains active..
well chosen words. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Very expressive and your poem is spiritual and uplifting, poets can bring the wisdom just like philosophers and make sense of our sometimes disruptive and destructive world by honing in on nature and good people, a sentimental write, love Dolly x
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Very expressive and your poem is spiritual and uplifting, poets can bring the wisdom just like philosophers and make sense of our sometimes disruptive and destructive world by honing in on nature and good people, a sentimental write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from bard owl
What an insightful poem! It is almost too complicated for me to understand this late at night. I do find wisdom to be the key word. I like that word "poetized". Sounds British. This poem must have taken a long time to compose. My gosh, it has so many rules -26 words, 8 lines, first to eighth lines in sequence of 4/5/2/2/3/3/3/4 words! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you, Linda
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What an insightful poem! It is almost too complicated for me to understand this late at night. I do find wisdom to be the key word. I like that word "poetized". Sounds British. This poem must have taken a long time to compose. My gosh, it has so many rules -26 words, 8 lines, first to eighth lines in sequence of 4/5/2/2/3/3/3/4 words! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
