Wise Bards
A 26 Word Poem in 8 Lines Read Author Notes Bards on wisdom73 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-six-word poem, Wise Bards, adheres to the word requirements and offers a decoding of the studies that pets make to find the truth in the world and relate it to others through verse. Nice.
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This twenty-six-word poem, Wise Bards, adheres to the word requirements and offers a decoding of the studies that pets make to find the truth in the world and relate it to others through verse. Nice.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
This is the first poem I have reviewed. The theme Bards caught my eye and piqued my interest. I like the explanations at the end It helped me to understand the author's point. Rhyming the last five lines also made me enjoy the poem a lot more. Good luck in the contest.
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This is the first poem I have reviewed. The theme Bards caught my eye and piqued my interest. I like the explanations at the end It helped me to understand the author's point. Rhyming the last five lines also made me enjoy the poem a lot more. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
Comment from jaded831
I try to bestow wisdom in my poems, after sixty years on this earth, I hope I've learned something I can pass on. Great entry. Your poem makes the reader appreciate the wisdom in the written. I love the picture. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up.
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I try to bestow wisdom in my poems, after sixty years on this earth, I hope I've learned something I can pass on. Great entry. Your poem makes the reader appreciate the wisdom in the written. I love the picture. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a fluid poem that complies fully with the prompt, nonsensical in its clever and punning delivery, offset by sobering imagery and less whimsical text within the striking image. I wish you good luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a fluid poem that complies fully with the prompt, nonsensical in its clever and punning delivery, offset by sobering imagery and less whimsical text within the striking image. I wish you good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from kiwijenny
Expression of my words
Reveals value of my wisdom
Our bards
Poetised wisdom...yes poetised wisdom adds sweetness to fiber..
Well penned
God bless
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Expression of my words
Reveals value of my wisdom
Our bards
Poetised wisdom...yes poetised wisdom adds sweetness to fiber..
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Neonewman
I enjoyed this little masterfully crafted piece you have entered for this particular 26 word poetry contest. I enjoy the twists and turns and find this one a top runner.
God bless
Steve
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I enjoyed this little masterfully crafted piece you have entered for this particular 26 word poetry contest. I enjoy the twists and turns and find this one a top runner.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Nanny 6
I read this poem several times, holding on to each word as if I can become a wise soul by ingesting each word written... this is a very well thought out poem about wisdom.
Judy
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I read this poem several times, holding on to each word as if I can become a wise soul by ingesting each word written... this is a very well thought out poem about wisdom.
Judy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Shanbreen
You did a good job in working within the constraints of the 26 word poem. But I didn't particularly care about the use of the word "wisdom" three times in the poem. This is just a personal opinion without any relevancy to it. Your wisdom remains intact. =)
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You did a good job in working within the constraints of the 26 word poem. But I didn't particularly care about the use of the word "wisdom" three times in the poem. This is just a personal opinion without any relevancy to it. Your wisdom remains intact. =)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a fun entry for the 26-Word Poetry contest.
I like the message you convey here.
Very nicely done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a fun entry for the 26-Word Poetry contest.
I like the message you convey here.
Very nicely done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Hitcher
Expression of my words
Reveals value of my wisdom -( A great opening)
I guess the value of ones wisdom to others would depend on what it is they are writing about friend. Wisdom neatly wrapped in poetry is always nice to open.
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Expression of my words
Reveals value of my wisdom -( A great opening)
I guess the value of ones wisdom to others would depend on what it is they are writing about friend. Wisdom neatly wrapped in poetry is always nice to open.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
