Wise Bards
A 26 Word Poem in 8 Lines Read Author Notes Bards on wisdom73 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Wise Bards", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven through each line of this talented poet's work are woven the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I'm not given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Wise Bards", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven through each line of this talented poet's work are woven the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I'm not given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from DonandVicki
Again, very well written and as far as I could tell the count was right on. It seems that your work has dominated the front page of Fanstory. you seem to be a poetic machine. I look forward to reading more of your inspiring work.
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Again, very well written and as far as I could tell the count was right on. It seems that your work has dominated the front page of Fanstory. you seem to be a poetic machine. I look forward to reading more of your inspiring work.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
My first read and I was trying to count syllables. All good on the word count. A unique and creative free style verse. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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My first read and I was trying to count syllables. All good on the word count. A unique and creative free style verse. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Great form. Love the homage to Shakespeare. The graphic and quote work very nicely as compliment to this piece.
Well executed. I'm certain your readers will appreciate this offering.
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Great form. Love the homage to Shakespeare. The graphic and quote work very nicely as compliment to this piece.
Well executed. I'm certain your readers will appreciate this offering.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Mark D. R.
I enjoyed this word restricted contest entry. I now know a bard who eloquently spelled/carved out his wisdom in a few words. (-:
The illustration's saying is excellent too.
Good luck in your writing prompt entry.
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I enjoyed this word restricted contest entry. I now know a bard who eloquently spelled/carved out his wisdom in a few words. (-:
The illustration's saying is excellent too.
Good luck in your writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Very interesting and challenging. While it has gotten me thinking about the relationship between wisdom and poetry, I am not sure that I have a grasp of the topic. Thanks for the challenge.
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Very interesting and challenging. While it has gotten me thinking about the relationship between wisdom and poetry, I am not sure that I have a grasp of the topic. Thanks for the challenge.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Joan E.
I am not a great poet, but I am glad the illustration you selected indicates I might have a special wisdom of humanity! I admired your reflections and your punctuation-free, twenty-six word poem. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
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I am not a great poet, but I am glad the illustration you selected indicates I might have a special wisdom of humanity! I admired your reflections and your punctuation-free, twenty-six word poem. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is a tightly packed gem with much wisdom inside. I love your use of bards and how you connect our current world to that of the medieval scribes. Such brevity yet such depth.
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This is a tightly packed gem with much wisdom inside. I love your use of bards and how you connect our current world to that of the medieval scribes. Such brevity yet such depth.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
Comment from Terry wrote
Thank you for the word 'poetised' It is a new one to me. You are fortunate to be among those who love language and explore its use. I'm sure you could 'stump trump' with this one!
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Thank you for the word 'poetised' It is a new one to me. You are fortunate to be among those who love language and explore its use. I'm sure you could 'stump trump' with this one!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
