Wise Bards
A 26 Word Poem in 8 Lines Read Author Notes Bards on wisdom73 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You are quite prolific in your ability to fill an entire room with your writing. Perhaps writing something new would be a better showcase for your obvious talents rather than repeatedly reviving past glories. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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You are quite prolific in your ability to fill an entire room with your writing. Perhaps writing something new would be a better showcase for your obvious talents rather than repeatedly reviving past glories. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
Poetry and all kinds of literature entertain, but they also convey wisdom and teach.
Interesting poem. Food for thought.
Thanks so much for sharing.
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Poetry and all kinds of literature entertain, but they also convey wisdom and teach.
Interesting poem. Food for thought.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from Boogienights
Interesting. I take this to mean that the wisdom of the bards is what guides us in life. But what if the bards are wrong? Just another way of looking at it. Thanks for sharing.
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Interesting. I take this to mean that the wisdom of the bards is what guides us in life. But what if the bards are wrong? Just another way of looking at it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
This is a winner for sure I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem the words those words told how a writer feels deep within their souls-that is so true.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Thank you for sharing this heart felted poem
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Wow!
This is a winner for sure I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem the words those words told how a writer feels deep within their souls-that is so true.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Thank you for sharing this heart felted poem
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Blue Hendrix
I thought the poem was beautiful and still conveyed a relatable and understandable message. Not to mention the rhymes. And effortless flow great job.
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I thought the poem was beautiful and still conveyed a relatable and understandable message. Not to mention the rhymes. And effortless flow great job.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Yuna Akil
Thank you for your poem. It amazes me how you were able to find words for the syllable requirements. (Our bards... conundrum).
I thought the poem was beautiful and still conveyed a relatable and understandable message. Not to mention the rhymes.
Cheers.
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Thank you for your poem. It amazes me how you were able to find words for the syllable requirements. (Our bards... conundrum).
I thought the poem was beautiful and still conveyed a relatable and understandable message. Not to mention the rhymes.
Cheers.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Tpa
it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words.
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it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise philosophical poem expresses its theme movingly. As poets we try to convey timeless, universal wisdom while keeping in mind that we ARE writing poems, not essays.
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Your ultra-concise philosophical poem expresses its theme movingly. As poets we try to convey timeless, universal wisdom while keeping in mind that we ARE writing poems, not essays.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Let's do hope that our poems show wisdom - something learned from experience and from much writing and reading. I like the poem and form that you've done
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Let's do hope that our poems show wisdom - something learned from experience and from much writing and reading. I like the poem and form that you've done
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Sally Law
I, too, seek to share my wisdom and life experiences in poetry. You words remain wise and aptly illustrated within your 26 word criteria. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
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I, too, seek to share my wisdom and life experiences in poetry. You words remain wise and aptly illustrated within your 26 word criteria. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
