Gold Leaves of Autumn
Minute Poetry14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about the transition from summer to autumn that is a wonderful time of year when the green leaves start changing into golden colors.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
  |
A very well-written minute poem about the transition from summer to autumn that is a wonderful time of year when the green leaves start changing into golden colors.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
-
Thank you for your great review. I?m grateful for your time and comments.
Comment from bard owl
This poem is excellently lyrical. You could set the words to music. You express the ending of summer. "a truth foregone that time moves on". There is a smoothness to this poem when read aloud. I enjoy the words being somewhat olde fashioned! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
|
This poem is excellently lyrical. You could set the words to music. You express the ending of summer. "a truth foregone that time moves on". There is a smoothness to this poem when read aloud. I enjoy the words being somewhat olde fashioned! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
-
Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Boogienights
This is beautiful. It captures the change of seasons in such an elegant way, I love how you formatted it. Lovely picture to accompany your words, best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
|
This is beautiful. It captures the change of seasons in such an elegant way, I love how you formatted it. Lovely picture to accompany your words, best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
-
Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from June Sargent
You have written a very fine example of a minute poem. I seem to struggle with this format myself. But this was a lovely portrait of autumn when leaves become
tomb's amber hall
they reach the ground
in silent sound
The words flowed nicely. Didn't feel contrived. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
|
You have written a very fine example of a minute poem. I seem to struggle with this format myself. But this was a lovely portrait of autumn when leaves become
tomb's amber hall
they reach the ground
in silent sound
The words flowed nicely. Didn't feel contrived. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
-
Thanks doe your encouraging comments Very much appreciated!
Comment from Kelly Grim
Excellent entry into the Minute Poetry contest! This is just so rich and inviting to the senses. It is a great telling of an well-told tale, the passage of time, the changing of the seasons. Excellent word choice! Nice meter and rhyme. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
|
Excellent entry into the Minute Poetry contest! This is just so rich and inviting to the senses. It is a great telling of an well-told tale, the passage of time, the changing of the seasons. Excellent word choice! Nice meter and rhyme. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
-
Thank you for the great review. I?m grateful for your time and comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely minute poem! I could really feel the transitional phase of the seasons through your words. The first stanza is so descriptive of the falling amber leaves (beautiful picture, too). Then the next one moves us to thoughts of some ominous change and finally, there's that last look behind to "summer's wane." Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
|
Lovely minute poem! I could really feel the transitional phase of the seasons through your words. The first stanza is so descriptive of the falling amber leaves (beautiful picture, too). Then the next one moves us to thoughts of some ominous change and finally, there's that last look behind to "summer's wane." Well done!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
-
Thank you for your great review. I thank you for your time and comments.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. I love the fall and you've described it perfectly. I like the transition of seasons in this. Foretells winter with the change of summer to the fall. Very good pace and rhyming. Beautiful picture. Hugh
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
|
Excellent. I love the fall and you've described it perfectly. I like the transition of seasons in this. Foretells winter with the change of summer to the fall. Very good pace and rhyming. Beautiful picture. Hugh
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
-
Thank you for the great review and comments. Regards!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Autumn being my favorite season of them all, Anonymous Poet, I found your Minute Poem contest entry a true delight to read.
After all, who doesn't love seeing the word "hoarfrost" used from time to time?
Excellent composition.
Good luck!
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
|
Autumn being my favorite season of them all, Anonymous Poet, I found your Minute Poem contest entry a true delight to read.
After all, who doesn't love seeing the word "hoarfrost" used from time to time?
Excellent composition.
Good luck!
~Dean
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
-
Haha. Dean, Happy Hoarfrost to you. Let Autumn begin. Thanks so much for a fun review!
-
My pleasure, you're very welcome. :)
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Anon, lovely well-written entry for the minute writing prompt. I enjoyed your imagery and the poem had a lovely flow and good publishing choices. A pretty poem to review and I noticed no errors.
Thanks for sharing your writing, which was an entertaining work to read and review, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
|
Hello Anon, lovely well-written entry for the minute writing prompt. I enjoyed your imagery and the poem had a lovely flow and good publishing choices. A pretty poem to review and I noticed no errors.
Thanks for sharing your writing, which was an entertaining work to read and review, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
-
Thank you for the good review and encouragement. Regards.
Comment from Lady Jane
What an immaculate minute poem here. The image within the writing can stand alone. You paint it so well. However, the image you've chose to accompany this is perfection. The language is reminiscent of olden times and the lovely presentation is flawless. Just an amazing minute poetry suite you've written here. No changes required. The entire write is dripping with concrete, yet, delicate verbiage that describes summer's parting and Autumn's place on stage. Well done, writer. Wish you the best in the contest with this perfect minute poetic piece.
Janelle
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
 |
What an immaculate minute poem here. The image within the writing can stand alone. You paint it so well. However, the image you've chose to accompany this is perfection. The language is reminiscent of olden times and the lovely presentation is flawless. Just an amazing minute poetry suite you've written here. No changes required. The entire write is dripping with concrete, yet, delicate verbiage that describes summer's parting and Autumn's place on stage. Well done, writer. Wish you the best in the contest with this perfect minute poetic piece.
Janelle
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
-
Thank you so much for the wonderful review and encouragement.
