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Monarchs

Lifte cycle of a butterfly

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Comment from RodG
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One cannot summarize the life cycle of the butterfly any better than you did in this short five-line poem. Beautiful artwork chosen, too. Nice use of alliteration in line one.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
    Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like your topic choice,
and the description of the Monarchs.
-The pivot line is good.
-Nice image in line four.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
    Thanks much for the read and the review.
reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Sep-2018
    You are welcome.