Truth and Fantasy
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Two Friends"Short stories
6 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse and personification of the nature scene the two friends cat, and dog discussing. The moon is sleeping while the sun shines and the sun sleeps when the moon is awake.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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A very well-written free verse and personification of the nature scene the two friends cat, and dog discussing. The moon is sleeping while the sun shines and the sun sleeps when the moon is awake.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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I?m glad you enjoyed my personification penning, thank you Sandra
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual write Trisha and I am not sure what nature is saying except to to say that there are disagreements but nature just gets on with life, so we should too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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An unusual write Trisha and I am not sure what nature is saying except to to say that there are disagreements but nature just gets on with life, so we should too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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It was simply a challenge (in any style) to use personification! I used the picture to have subjects for that. I hope that clears it for you . Thanks very much for your kind review
Hugs. Trisha
Comment from jenintorre
Hi there bucket list
I enjoyed reading your poem although I think it is probably written more for children. Great presentation and well chosen artwork. Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Hi there bucket list
I enjoyed reading your poem although I think it is probably written more for children. Great presentation and well chosen artwork. Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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I agree with you, but I don?t think there was any stipulation for anything except personification Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. I love your personification of the various natural phenomenon. I often wonder what trees and mountains might say. Their take on human interaction would be very interesting. I don't know if you can reduce the size of the font. Made reading a bit disjointed for me. Hugh
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Excellent. I love your personification of the various natural phenomenon. I often wonder what trees and mountains might say. Their take on human interaction would be very interesting. I don't know if you can reduce the size of the font. Made reading a bit disjointed for me. Hugh
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Sorry Hugh, I?m just learning the tricks to the advanced editor use. I am grateful for your very positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from dmt1967
This is another great story poem. I like the dialogue in this one. It started with a cat and a dog until others butted in. I like how real it sounded. Thank you for sharing and take care.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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This is another great story poem. I like the dialogue in this one. It started with a cat and a dog until others butted in. I like how real it sounded. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your appreciative review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks, in a personified style, all the characters like cat, dog, trees, boughs, mountains, that how all express their views about the matter whether the sun is sleeping or not the question raised by two friends; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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This speaks, in a personified style, all the characters like cat, dog, trees, boughs, mountains, that how all express their views about the matter whether the sun is sleeping or not the question raised by two friends; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Personification is fun, I thank you for a positive review
Hugs, Trisha
