Innocence Lost
Young life cut short by rape17 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
It is a shame innocence is lost in this world by self satisfaction by ruining the life of another. Lust and greed are running a mock all over the country and nothing is being done about. The people shoulder held accountable for their misdeeds.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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It is a shame innocence is lost in this world by self satisfaction by ruining the life of another. Lust and greed are running a mock all over the country and nothing is being done about. The people shoulder held accountable for their misdeeds.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thanks for reading my friend. Children are precious, today they are abused because they can't fight back. How are you possum? XXK.
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I haven't seen any since I been here we do have raccoons and bears deer are farther out in the woods. To many four wheelers running through here for them to feel safe.
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Children sure are the ones who suffer and it is so sad
Comment from Sasha
This is a shocking and sad entry for this One Line Poem Contest. This is a problem I was completely unaware of.I wish you had added more to your notes. I wish you all the best in this contest too.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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This is a shocking and sad entry for this One Line Poem Contest. This is a problem I was completely unaware of.I wish you had added more to your notes. I wish you all the best in this contest too.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Innocence lost is a world wide problem of stolen children; not just here, all over the world behind closed doors. Thank you my friend, for reading and reviewing. XXK.
Comment from aryr
Wow, a great one line poem, good luck in the contest. It is sad that this should happen in any culture, especially to the young and innocent. You said it all my friend, no truer words. Very well done, thanks for sharing. As always you provide great pictures.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Wow, a great one line poem, good luck in the contest. It is sad that this should happen in any culture, especially to the young and innocent. You said it all my friend, no truer words. Very well done, thanks for sharing. As always you provide great pictures.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Hello Aryr, Thanks so much for reading my friend. Innocence lost is a common problem all over the globe. We must try and protect our children. Blessings, Kay.
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You are so welcome Kay and I agree, in fact not just children but anyone who is a victim of rape.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This sort of thing is happening everywhere, Kay, it's a disgrace and the perpetrators should be castrated once caught! I would do it myself! Well done, this is a very powerful message you have sent out in this short one line poem. Good luck in the contest. Sandra xxx
Card on its way! :)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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This sort of thing is happening everywhere, Kay, it's a disgrace and the perpetrators should be castrated once caught! I would do it myself! Well done, this is a very powerful message you have sent out in this short one line poem. Good luck in the contest. Sandra xxx
Card on its way! :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Hello Mrs Seagull, Yes, I would castrate the bastards too. Young people being used and abused for men's pleasure. Thanks for dropping in, nice to see you; hope all is well in S'Hampton? Love, Kay.
Comment from RGstar
So much said in so few words, dear Aussie, they need no interpretation.
Wishing victims a new day. If possible, one will be found. Have a great Sunday
My very best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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So much said in so few words, dear Aussie, they need no interpretation.
Wishing victims a new day. If possible, one will be found. Have a great Sunday
My very best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Hello from Oz! Thanks so much for reading my friend. It didn't need a lengthy explanation. Children are our most precious commodity that must be protected. Our weather is great, in Spring now, still in drought. Blessings RG XXK
Comment from meeshu
this is a horror that seems to be spreading everywhere. there is no real effort to stop it. governments give lip service, but no one has the stomach for it. thank you for bringing it out into the open, Kace.............meeshu
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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this is a horror that seems to be spreading everywhere. there is no real effort to stop it. governments give lip service, but no one has the stomach for it. thank you for bringing it out into the open, Kace.............meeshu
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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Hello Meeshu, a lot goes on without whites knowing about it. Now, domestic violence is high here in the white society. Thank you for reading. Blessings, K.
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why can't people just get along?
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We have to go through these dark times before we can see the Light of God. He gave us free will, boy, have some abused it.
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Amen.
Comment from kahpot
How true, these horrendous acts have been going on for many years, ( I was shearing in a town called Wilkania) and came across situations as these and the young girls had no help or anywhere to turn, heartbreaking, this is an excellent and powerful one-line poem very well done and my best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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How true, these horrendous acts have been going on for many years, ( I was shearing in a town called Wilkania) and came across situations as these and the young girls had no help or anywhere to turn, heartbreaking, this is an excellent and powerful one-line poem very well done and my best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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I know of Wilcannia. Thanks for reading and the good wishes too. Blessings, Kay.
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I did say I was a shearer, not a speller (humor), yes not even the police would turn up****kahpot
