Our life
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Whoa that's a pretty psychedelic and most beautiful fabric kahpot. And yes this could certainly be considered in the similar format to the tanka, and in fact can't see really why it isn't.
A fantastic metaphor for a lasting love enmeshed with heart and soul.
Great job my friend.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Whoa that's a pretty psychedelic and most beautiful fabric kahpot. And yes this could certainly be considered in the similar format to the tanka, and in fact can't see really why it isn't.
A fantastic metaphor for a lasting love enmeshed with heart and soul.
Great job my friend.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, this is a wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks our life over ages now is covered grown from fabric, knitted so well, and our love is now our quilt so selfless so sacrificial and hearty; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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This speaks our life over ages now is covered grown from fabric, knitted so well, and our love is now our quilt so selfless so sacrificial and hearty; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing
Comment from meeshu
I like this poem as is, but add the picture and it takes on a whole new meaning. your love is a black-light tapestry? say, hello to Twiggy for me..
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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I like this poem as is, but add the picture and it takes on a whole new meaning. your love is a black-light tapestry? say, hello to Twiggy for me..
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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Thank for reading and reviewing
