Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Wise words here. Poetry is all about embracing the senses - life and all that it encompasses, the good, the bad and the ugly. When we do, it opens up a whole new perspective and our world expands with creativity. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

I value your kind review, June
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Your speaks to the magic and wonder of words. Words can take us anywhere in the universe. They have amazing properties; on the positive side they can amaze and inspire, helping us see the beauty of life. They also can do the opposite, so the writer has a responsibility when using words to express. Excellent work. Hugh

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thank you Hugh, I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Kelly Grim

Exceptional

This is such a gem! It's perfect! I like the image, the text and the font, the color, everything! And how true it is! What a great 5-7-5 contest entry. Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

What a great review, Kelly! You are very kind
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

This is an excellent entry into the current five seven five poetry contest. The syllables are correct and the words are poetically used to transmit the poet's vision. That vision is enhanced by the near perfect art work. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thanks so much for your validating review,
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Bucketlist, this is a such a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest, I love your word choices, and the poem is so good as it encourages us to look at the world around us and appreciate the peace and beauty we find there through our senses. Thanks for sharing that word too, it is a lovely sounding word and I have added it to my list of ones to use in my writing. And it is one of the reasons I love reviewing other people's work as you can pick up ideas and words from other writers. Ones you may never think of using yourself.

I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Ans, I really appreciate your lovely review. If you go to Pinterest, and type in ?words?, there?s a plethora of choices.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

Different type of poem.Interesting way it is written with the picture. Good luck in the contest. Good message in the poem with the flow of words making it an easy read.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thanks for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

So true and this is an ambient write Trisha and worthy of a win, I loved that you touched my senses with your wonderful words, a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018

Thank you for a super review, and the honor of six stars. I?m delighted you enjoyed my short penning!
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

Any lover of language would eat this up as a meal. What a brilliant and true little piece of imagery this is. I love the definition you pair alongside it. Creative and unique.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018

Shauna, I really appreciate your complimentary review., Reader enjoyment is the ?icing on the cake? for me.
Hugs, Trisha