Of Sea, Earth and Sky
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Majesty on High"A collection of haikus
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A haiku uses few words as possible like the , an, a
I would say
High on thermal winds, just a suggestion as it would seem less awkward and more descriptive.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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A haiku uses few words as possible like the , an, a
I would say
High on thermal winds, just a suggestion as it would seem less awkward and more descriptive.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent rating and suggestion. I will use it. Much appreciated.
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Please never be offended by my suggestions
Comment from nomi338
With all the gifts that the eagle possess, man can alter the eagle's world. Man can have an effect on where the eagle feeds, where it may nest, even to some degree where the eagle may fly. And yet the God that created both the eagle and the man can undo all that the man may devise.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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With all the gifts that the eagle possess, man can alter the eagle's world. Man can have an effect on where the eagle feeds, where it may nest, even to some degree where the eagle may fly. And yet the God that created both the eagle and the man can undo all that the man may devise.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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This is true. Thanks for the excellent rating and your comments.
