Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

Combined with your Author's note, this is a powerful posting. Long ago, I worked with bipolar clients and I have empathy for their difficult situation. You obviously have a talent for alliteration...one of my favorite poetic elements.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020

If you like that you ought to see my book titled alliterative Lee nurse sense I literally literally zany nurse sense. I utilized alliteration for two full poems one is called waiting weary warriors and the other one is also in there

Comment from irishauthorme

Exceptional

Very intuitive speculation! Made me wonder where I am, but that's too confusing.
Don't believe in being born broken, but with certain propensities, some good, some bad, and what a bitch trying to sort them out! However, by midlife they seem to sort themselves, or at least hold the hormones in bay, allowing us a modicum peace of mind. The middle perspective is where I am now, a precarious perch from which there is a great view, but little to hold on to.
Keep exploring!
irish

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

Great perspective Irish a wonderful way of taking it apart in a way that you're not over from your perspective but from my perspective but also with a common ground in the middle love to disturb you blessings, Darren

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Thanks again

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I find it quite a talent for someone to be able to do these acronyms. And further more gifted to be able to make sense of it all. But to write as profoundly as you do is very compelling. I like your idea of three words and the symbolism of it. I enjoy reading your writing.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Thanks so much , this was somewhat experimental when I started but it turned out to be a good thing and I've gotten really great responses from it. Rama Devi told me that it was polished and needed no improvement I am so happy for the great response I've gotten from this I've probably already gotten 6 reviews on it I really appreciate your comments Liz . . More to come

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like your creatively structured acronym poem, Darren. Yes, using three words in each line does bring a balance. We are all broken and need that balance that only God gives. My favorite lines were:
"L Leanings, learning, leaps
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R Really rearranged reality"

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Thank you so much for your wonderful review and comments. This was someone experimental when I started but it turned out to be a pretty good thing that has gotten some great responses. I really appreciate your comments on this and I appreciate you pointing out what you like the most. Blessings, Darren

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

My dear brother Badger, this is a very creative acrostic with all lines artistically alliterated - without sounding forced, which is quite a fantastic feat! The artwork is intense...and the author notes are very interesting. Indeed...there are three...the middle and the two extremes. Favorite lines (strokes of genius):



I inducing indecisive insanity



L Leanings, learning, leaps


No nits or suggestions. This is polished, precise and presented well!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Hey rd, it's difficult for me to convey my appreciation coming from you I find this very high regard. Experimental, but it has gotten some great responses and I have a couple of new fans here and I'm going to continue writing and getting great inspiration from other writers such as yourself. I really appreciate your comments on this, and I appreciate you pointing out what you like to do the most. Blessings, warmly
, Darren

reply by rama devi on 28-Aug-2018

Thanks for your super gracious response, dear Darren. Glad you are encouraged!
*blessings*
Warmly, rd

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

I can sense a strong progression in your demeanor. There's an open minded shift in your penning, this acrostic style is a surprise. Thanks for sharing, nice touch to use alliteration with each letter. "Pursuing perplexed planning" is my favorite
Hug. Trisha. Hug

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments I really appreciate your input on this. I'm glad you notice the Improvement, this acrostic was a new style and it was a bit experimental but I have gotten some great responses from it and I really appreciate your review and your input on this it means a lot to me. Blessings, Darren

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Wow this is good...and your reasoning was very well....bi polar...manic depressed exceptionally over the top...it must be a hard life with only a middle word for balance
God bless...well penned...good picture too

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Hey kiwi Jenny I really appreciate your input on this. It was experimental at first, but I've gotten some great responses from it and I really appreciate your view and your input blessings, Darren

Comment from Terry wrote

Excellent

Very clever arrangement for an acrostic, using multiple words per letter, with a rationale of how many words. I have experience with bipolar family members, and the vocabulary you chose to use is quite relevant.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Thank you so much Terry I appreciate your comments and it is a pleasure to meet a new Rider on here. It's really a pleasure in an honor to write with you here, and I certainly appreciate your comments. There certainly more to come as I have 3 more poems in queue thanks again warmly, Darren

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Very interesting.
I would be the manic...actually, I'd be dipping my paintbrush into the cup, ha ha.
I don't believe anyone perceives reality exactly like anyone else. That's why there's so many different religions, yet always...one God.
And they all believe they're right. And, in fact, they are, based on their perceptions.
I enjoyed this...made me think!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Dipping your brush into the cup a wonderful colorful message that inspires me there will be I'll be riding on that sometime soon here I already have three more poems and Q I have been writing extensively. Irish, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your input and your comment and tell him these things they really mean a lot to me. Blessings, Darren

reply by Irish Rain on 28-Aug-2018

You're welcome Mr. Darren!!!