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FAMILY TIES.

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"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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How many times do we pass the broken and the needy and turn away? Too many I would say. This poem is wrought with great truth and insight. The photo is heartbreaking.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

Comment from Sugarray77
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Your depiction of the anguish your character is walking through when they realize their only importance to the people around is the relationship with Dad. I'm sure that would also create a father/child strain as well. Good descriptive words and situations to support your theme.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018