FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Rhonnie I really really love that turn around sense of humor. It's So amazing how the way you use words and the tone you say the words makes a difference and not the words themselves and the way you did that reverse apology with the word sorry I love it is very humorous
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Rhonnie I really really love that turn around sense of humor. It's So amazing how the way you use words and the tone you say the words makes a difference and not the words themselves and the way you did that reverse apology with the word sorry I love it is very humorous
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from LaRosa
Beautiful, Rhonnie!
I love the twist in the situation and the the after thought: Now we know how Spanky got his name.
I considered it for a fleeting moment when I first read his name and then went on with the story. Ahh, the innocent wisdom of a child. Not too innocent here though.
You express yourself well, straight forward and in an easy to read rhythm. Good job.
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Beautiful, Rhonnie!
I love the twist in the situation and the the after thought: Now we know how Spanky got his name.
I considered it for a fleeting moment when I first read his name and then went on with the story. Ahh, the innocent wisdom of a child. Not too innocent here though.
You express yourself well, straight forward and in an easy to read rhythm. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from jmdg1954
Cute little story about two brothers growing together. Of course Dad tries doing what's right.
Dad was almost there but got outwitted by Spanky.
Good twist at the end . John
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Cute little story about two brothers growing together. Of course Dad tries doing what's right.
Dad was almost there but got outwitted by Spanky.
Good twist at the end . John
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
