Daybreak
Living in the moment15 total reviews
Comment from RodG
You have captured the essence of your lovely picture well.
Easy to visualize the beginning of a misty summer day.
The S- sounds in every line help create the tranquil atmosphere of the scene.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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You have captured the essence of your lovely picture well.
Easy to visualize the beginning of a misty summer day.
The S- sounds in every line help create the tranquil atmosphere of the scene.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and encouragement.
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Thank you for your comments and encouragement.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully written 5-7-5 you have penned for the contest. You also used very beautiful imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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This is a very beautifully written 5-7-5 you have penned for the contest. You also used very beautiful imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your encouragement.
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Thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from Richard J
Ohhh-MY!
I love nothing better than a gorgeously presented and composed Haiku, and this is simply heavenly ... I want to be there, in this moment.
The contest should be won right here.
Stunning work ... I simply love it!
Thank you for sharing, for the points 'n cents, too! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Ohhh-MY!
I love nothing better than a gorgeously presented and composed Haiku, and this is simply heavenly ... I want to be there, in this moment.
The contest should be won right here.
Stunning work ... I simply love it!
Thank you for sharing, for the points 'n cents, too! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks so very much for your comments and great review. Much appreciated.
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Couldn't help myself! 😊
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks nicely a moment in life, and tells softly the feeling of moment with the sun rises higher the earth by degrees at par with the rising wakes, how nice to think of; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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This speaks nicely a moment in life, and tells softly the feeling of moment with the sun rises higher the earth by degrees at par with the rising wakes, how nice to think of; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is effective, as
you create a vivid picture of a
misty, summer morning.
-The last line is a good satori.
-Good luck in the contest, Sugarray.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is effective, as
you create a vivid picture of a
misty, summer morning.
-The last line is a good satori.
-Good luck in the contest, Sugarray.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Pam. Much appreciated.
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You are very welcome.
