God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from Anntonette
You are getting pretty good at these acrostic and limitations. I love how you made boxes within your poetry to separate 2 lines each. Well done!
Good luck in the contest!
Deserved six stars.
- Anntonette J
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You are getting pretty good at these acrostic and limitations. I love how you made boxes within your poetry to separate 2 lines each. Well done!
Good luck in the contest!
Deserved six stars.
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An intriguing write that seems to point the reader outward rather than draw them inward...to see one's own potential rather than look to others for signs of such. ;). ;) Thank you for sharing! ;)
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An intriguing write that seems to point the reader outward rather than draw them inward...to see one's own potential rather than look to others for signs of such. ;). ;) Thank you for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Lady Jane
envision now, see it live here', - comma inside the ','
What a fun read. I'm assuming you've won a prize, dear? God is reigning down his blessings upon your golden quill? This was written well and is very profound. I'm hoping I understood the meaning correctly. That makes my heart happy to see good come unto my fellow writers :) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest, dear.
Janelle
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envision now, see it live here', - comma inside the ','
What a fun read. I'm assuming you've won a prize, dear? God is reigning down his blessings upon your golden quill? This was written well and is very profound. I'm hoping I understood the meaning correctly. That makes my heart happy to see good come unto my fellow writers :) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest, dear.
Janelle
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from lyenochka
Good job in meeting the poetry contest's requirements of the six words. It seems that your poem shows that God is encouraging you in your literary dreams.
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Good job in meeting the poetry contest's requirements of the six words. It seems that your poem shows that God is encouraging you in your literary dreams.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2018
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
So very well done. It is an acrostic as well. God does want us to dream of great things done for Him. We may not all get recognized for it, but God knows and we will be rewarded. Even little things done for the Lord, can have might results. Well said. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
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So very well done. It is an acrostic as well. God does want us to dream of great things done for Him. We may not all get recognized for it, but God knows and we will be rewarded. Even little things done for the Lord, can have might results. Well said. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 27-Aug-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
Another constrained piece of writing - within the parameters of the competition of course. I find these hard to judge and try to put myself in the author's place to confront those same limitations before reacting to them.
I think you've done particularly well within the limitations and the only change I would consider is reversing the order of the words "foreign icy" to aid the flow just a little. At first read I questioned the use of "Dais" however a second read saw me okay with it after all.
I'm not religious at all, though I appreciate the need for faith. In any case I like your effort and wish you luck in the contest.
Bill
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Another constrained piece of writing - within the parameters of the competition of course. I find these hard to judge and try to put myself in the author's place to confront those same limitations before reacting to them.
I think you've done particularly well within the limitations and the only change I would consider is reversing the order of the words "foreign icy" to aid the flow just a little. At first read I questioned the use of "Dais" however a second read saw me okay with it after all.
I'm not religious at all, though I appreciate the need for faith. In any case I like your effort and wish you luck in the contest.
Bill
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from jusylee72
so interesting and it demands that you read it several times to discover the intricacies within the words. I have to admit I don't totally understand it but I love the use of GOD and the literacy. What is the Orb?
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so interesting and it demands that you read it several times to discover the intricacies within the words. I have to admit I don't totally understand it but I love the use of GOD and the literacy. What is the Orb?
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a spiritual and simple expression of regard for the Word and existence of God, anywhere and everywhere. It complies perfectly with the prompt and the image is clearly one of a pastor, which complements the essence of the write. Best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a spiritual and simple expression of regard for the Word and existence of God, anywhere and everywhere. It complies perfectly with the prompt and the image is clearly one of a pastor, which complements the essence of the write. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from nomi338
I believe that most of the poetic work that I am proud of came as a result of my having read and been inspired by something I read in the bible. So since the bible writers were inspired by God himself, I feel that God gave me the words to write as well as His giving me the ability to use his words to make religious poetry in the first place. My experience has been that in many cases, God speaks and man runs away, as in the case of Jonah being swallowed by the big fish.
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I believe that most of the poetic work that I am proud of came as a result of my having read and been inspired by something I read in the bible. So since the bible writers were inspired by God himself, I feel that God gave me the words to write as well as His giving me the ability to use his words to make religious poetry in the first place. My experience has been that in many cases, God speaks and man runs away, as in the case of Jonah being swallowed by the big fish.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from Joan E.
I admired the way you wove the required words into your poem. Your "gold medal"/"Orb Prize" is very creative. Here's to achieving your dreams and best wishes in the contest- Joan
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I admired the way you wove the required words into your poem. Your "gold medal"/"Orb Prize" is very creative. Here's to achieving your dreams and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
