God Omniscient Deeds
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "God Whispers Man Clamours"God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from LJbutterfly
This is phenomenal poetry, especially considering your use of six words dictated by someone else. You accomplished it and did a remarkable job in describing a wish, or desire, or dream of many aspiring writers. Great work.
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This is phenomenal poetry, especially considering your use of six words dictated by someone else. You accomplished it and did a remarkable job in describing a wish, or desire, or dream of many aspiring writers. Great work.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a highly imaginative poem, which comes across as very optimistic and powerful. It could alternatively be called man begs, God rewards, and if I may say, generously so. Well written.
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This is a highly imaginative poem, which comes across as very optimistic and powerful. It could alternatively be called man begs, God rewards, and if I may say, generously so. Well written.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from amahra
You did a great job keeping to the guidelines of this contest poem. It's difficult to use someone else's words to create a poem as if it were your own. But you did. Great job.
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You did a great job keeping to the guidelines of this contest poem. It's difficult to use someone else's words to create a poem as if it were your own. But you did. Great job.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
You made an excellent choice of the words prescribed in the contest. I liked this spiritual poem, the imagery, visuals and presentation.
Thank you for your detailed author notes.
Good luck in the contest.
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You made an excellent choice of the words prescribed in the contest. I liked this spiritual poem, the imagery, visuals and presentation.
Thank you for your detailed author notes.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Aiste Radvilaviciute
I think you did a great job there. I was quite a challenge to write a poem in 40 words only, in 3 lines, using these 6 words: God, On, Dream, Whispers, Man, and Clamours, on and about the Poetry Contest: God Whispers Man Appears.
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I think you did a great job there. I was quite a challenge to write a poem in 40 words only, in 3 lines, using these 6 words: God, On, Dream, Whispers, Man, and Clamours, on and about the Poetry Contest: God Whispers Man Appears.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from poetsteve15
I like your poem I do not understand what you are trying to say? I thought I did as I read it but your notes confused me? as for the writing I see nothing wrong with it so I'll not take away any stars because I don't understand it.
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I like your poem I do not understand what you are trying to say? I thought I did as I read it but your notes confused me? as for the writing I see nothing wrong with it so I'll not take away any stars because I don't understand it.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, dear friend, when it comes to this site there are at least two I'm quite sure either REALLY think they are experts, or are motivated by pure malice, at least where I am concerned. (It might be time to call on a few prayer warriors...) I am plagued with glitches here, but this one is a new one! YOUR 'BEST' RIBBON FOR THIS OUTSTANDING WORK IS SHOWING ON MY SCREEN AS A TINY DOT!
I absolutely LOVE this poem. I would prefer the quotation marks were used (for clarity), but otherwise, I think it's brilliant.
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Well, dear friend, when it comes to this site there are at least two I'm quite sure either REALLY think they are experts, or are motivated by pure malice, at least where I am concerned. (It might be time to call on a few prayer warriors...) I am plagued with glitches here, but this one is a new one! YOUR 'BEST' RIBBON FOR THIS OUTSTANDING WORK IS SHOWING ON MY SCREEN AS A TINY DOT!
I absolutely LOVE this poem. I would prefer the quotation marks were used (for clarity), but otherwise, I think it's brilliant.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Interesting poem with good subject matter. Very good ideas and word choices which make this an interesting poem to read. Well done. Hope to read more from you soon.
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Interesting poem with good subject matter. Very good ideas and word choices which make this an interesting poem to read. Well done. Hope to read more from you soon.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
Comment from Cedar
This is well written. You have said a great deal with so few words. These short versions are sometimes harder to write than the long versions...Bill
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This is well written. You have said a great deal with so few words. These short versions are sometimes harder to write than the long versions...Bill
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
Comment from Mame
What a truly marvellous message and how true it is! If only we all followed our dreams we would find out truly who we are- this is so inspiring. You carefully selected words are certainly an endorsement that you are following the path God wants for you. Terrific!
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What a truly marvellous message and how true it is! If only we all followed our dreams we would find out truly who we are- this is so inspiring. You carefully selected words are certainly an endorsement that you are following the path God wants for you. Terrific!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
