God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi ALD, you have met this prompt challenge well. Not easy to write with a fixed 40 words, 3 lines and use the required words - God, On, Dream, Whispers, Man Clamours. Quite demanding but you have done well. Good explanatory notes do help. I find these challenges difficult. Warm regards and good luck - Dorothy
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Hi ALD, you have met this prompt challenge well. Not easy to write with a fixed 40 words, 3 lines and use the required words - God, On, Dream, Whispers, Man Clamours. Quite demanding but you have done well. Good explanatory notes do help. I find these challenges difficult. Warm regards and good luck - Dorothy
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from Merajul
Good line, well crafted poem.
God whispers to me, 'remember your dream, envision now, see it live here',
A great entry. Made it very sensible despite the constraints of the writing with the words give. All the best.
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Good line, well crafted poem.
God whispers to me, 'remember your dream, envision now, see it live here',
A great entry. Made it very sensible despite the constraints of the writing with the words give. All the best.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from Zue65
The author was true to the requirements of the writing prompt and was in hjis best elements in drafting this poetic lines. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing your talent to the readers. God bless.
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The author was true to the requirements of the writing prompt and was in hjis best elements in drafting this poetic lines. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing your talent to the readers. God bless.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Good job on this entry in the contest, alcreator. You have definitely included all the words needed per the contest rules and whatsmore you used them efficiently. Good Luck in this contest. Bob
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Good job on this entry in the contest, alcreator. You have definitely included all the words needed per the contest rules and whatsmore you used them efficiently. Good Luck in this contest. Bob
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from heart of Lou
Your poem is a reminder that one can always keep on dreaming, and working towards the prize in the end. You have used all the required words, and I wish you well with the contest.
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Your poem is a reminder that one can always keep on dreaming, and working towards the prize in the end. You have used all the required words, and I wish you well with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from ciliverde
Woe to those who cannot remember their dreams...! Not everyone can, but I'm not sure why.
I always thought of 'clamor' being a word referring to noise made by people (plural) rather than a single person, but it is interesting to see the way you use it here.
The meaning of your poem is oblique to me, but I think it refers to the gift of writing being one that is divine - which I believe is true.
Carol
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Woe to those who cannot remember their dreams...! Not everyone can, but I'm not sure why.
I always thought of 'clamor' being a word referring to noise made by people (plural) rather than a single person, but it is interesting to see the way you use it here.
The meaning of your poem is oblique to me, but I think it refers to the gift of writing being one that is divine - which I believe is true.
Carol
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from tfawcus
I like the suggestion here that God has put the writer here on earth for a purpose, and given him a dream. By following that dream and he will find the riches of a life well-lived and of personal fulfillment, including worldwide recognition, which is described metaphorically as "the Orb Prize".
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I like the suggestion here that God has put the writer here on earth for a purpose, and given him a dream. By following that dream and he will find the riches of a life well-lived and of personal fulfillment, including worldwide recognition, which is described metaphorically as "the Orb Prize".
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, I enjoyed your piece of work. You have a talent. A great writing skill. The way you presented your work is so exceptional. I learnt something too about dreams. Thanks. Keep it up.
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Hi, I enjoyed your piece of work. You have a talent. A great writing skill. The way you presented your work is so exceptional. I learnt something too about dreams. Thanks. Keep it up.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO ALCREATOR: I can relate to your posting here because it reminds me of a passage in my Holy Bible at: 2nd CORINTHIANS: 6:2. You said: "envision now, see it live here." That matches. Thank you for sharing. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO ALCREATOR: I can relate to your posting here because it reminds me of a passage in my Holy Bible at: 2nd CORINTHIANS: 6:2. You said: "envision now, see it live here." That matches. Thank you for sharing. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from Raul1
Nice way of putting what God offers us. He offers us hope and belief in ourselves. Our lives are much better because of thanks to God. This poem is inspirational. Good luck in the contest. You poem is very good.
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Nice way of putting what God offers us. He offers us hope and belief in ourselves. Our lives are much better because of thanks to God. This poem is inspirational. Good luck in the contest. You poem is very good.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
