Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Oooo ooo ooo I want to do one like this...or make a new poetic form called the insertable. Where you can insert readers name there. Well penned
I love the acrostic GOD
God bless

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Exceptional

I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE THIS
YOU SHOULD DO VERY WELL IN THIS
CONTEST YOU WOULD HAVE MY VOTE

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Well written and illustrated short poem of the power of God. We need to follow our dreams and also listen to the whispers to expand our lives and the lives of others.

Hope you do well with the prompt.

Keep writing.

dp

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think you could be well right, in fact I really like it, you've done well, by fitting all the words in your work, and acrostically designed it rather well, congratulations, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"God Whispers Man Clamours", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was thought-provoking to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018