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FAMILY TIES.

Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Happy Birff Day Wendy."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from heart of Lou
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Typical child's sentiment! He loves his sister and wishes her a happy birthday, but is he really thinking of his sister's happiness, since he forgot to include the dollar? Or is he more excited about the cake and ice cream which he gets to taste as well?

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

Comment from barkingdog
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Great!
Fun to read but it does have an underlying sweetness to it.
A brother remembered his sister's birthday and took the time to write her a card.

:) e

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018