Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This is a beautiful, simple poem with great wisdom woven in, the kind that can only be written by someone with life experience. This is good advice for anyone, especially young people. Great poem!

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thank you for your review and kind words.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What a clever poem and accompanying, parallel picture! I enjoyed your philosophy and the rhymes to back it up!! Life should be a pleasant poem!!! Big cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Joan.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is another great poem packed with helpful advice. It's well-written has a nice even flow, rhymes well, overall a fun read. Your artwork is perfect.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Misty.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Very cute one, Patricia! And I like the comparison of taking life an inch at a time instead of a yard at a time. But sometimes, even taking life a day at a time, it's still hard. Great little reminder of what Jesus taught that today's trouble is enough.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Helen.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a delightful little poem that would be perfect as a gift for a friend for any time of the year....package it with a measuring tape and a book of daily reflections...how wonderful!! :) :)

Thank you for sharing such an awesome composition (and piece of advice) with all of us!! :) :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, YM.

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Clever take on living one day at a time. I liked the sun shiney yellow which coordinated with your photo and your words. Good rhyme. Reminds me of old adages that people repeat for generations. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Sandy.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Cute, nicely done on the rhyme and meter. And so true live one day ay a time and take it as it comes. Looking to far ahead is just added stress. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, William.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Wise words. Like everyone I want instant gratification. I see small progress in my physical therapy, but get frustrated easily. I need to take it slow and be greatful for small improvements. Your poem reminded me to just take one minute at a time.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem, Patricia. Your presentation is great--the color scheme, the internal rhyme, the picture, & the smooth flow of lines. But it is your message that is strong. Yes, we all need to take it one day at a time & not jump off into the unknown. We'll get to where we need to be with careful actions. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Jan.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I'm glad to see the humor in this. Your rhymes are great fun. I don't know about it being that easy to create a rhyme, though. Good advice about taking one day at a time. About the time you think life's turning out to be a cinch, that's usually when something goes wrong. Great work! judi

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Judi.

reply by judiverse on 23-Aug-2018

You're welcome. I agree about taking one day at a time.